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sorry is me again! it most seem like i'm harasing you, or like i have no life, but i re-read the thing again because is so good. kyota most be familly with the bad omen bird, he just had to mention the colorful concubines and look where wolf landed, also he most be going insane with worry. me wolfram i'd 've burned that guy ko-whats his name, to cinders for all that manhandling (a.k.a pampering i was been sarcastic before) wolf has managed to keep his virtue so far but for how much longer. will he be forced to have sex with the fa-who is it king. and i was wondering since they say this guy has powers if wolf does have sex with him will he absorb them as well, will it hurt him like that first with yuri, will he be able to use them too. so many posibilities, i'm so looking foward to wolf encounter with the king, i know there is no way in hell that wolf will go down quietly the king is in for a ride. and what would kyota's and yuri's reaction be to the manhandling (and posible impending rape) that wolf has been through. oh and i can already imagine the make up sex beteewn wolf and yuri when they are finaly together, it will be awsome.any way i'll stop babling and boring you, promise i wont bother you any more, or not untill you up date the next chap at least, i hope its soon ja ne. ps gomen for been obnotious and yes its true my grammar sucks oh and by the way I DON'T HAVE A LIVE! 0.0

Nooooooo, that stupid king can't rape Wolfram T_T Poor him!
Thanks for your story but please, don't make Wolfram surffer more

THANK YUO! This was the first time i ever reviewed a fic and was actually replied that really made me happy. just like u writer wnt to know what we think about your stories we reader get curious as to what u think of our opinions, any way enough of that chap 9 was so good who would have thought that wolfram would be so indicnant for being pampered, but then again in his situation i would have to. that guy lasami i feel really sorry for him, he seems like such a nice guy. well i'm glad u agree with me, and i trust u to make our dear presious prince suffer some more (sadistic evil grin). looking foward for some more soon. ja ne :)

Bravo! Wolfram is getting the slave treatment. lol. I wonder how this will change him.

you are good-this chapter was excellent--wondering what the rest of the party is doing and how they plan on getting wolfram back. also trying to figure out why wolfrom didnt use his mazoku (spelling sorry} to get free and get back at kohar. im hoping its all master plan to get to fayar. keep up good work and thanks for sharing

OMG! I read Working out the Paradox in 2 days XDDD I love your story. You keep your characters superbly in character. The only time in the story when I stopped and said to myself "That would never happen" was when Conrad called Yuuri a brat XD So anyway, after I read all these chapters I decided I needed to leave a review before I kept on reading~~~~ Keep up the good work! ^o^

As a side note, since I saw in your A/N's that you don't know how old Wolfram is, in the anime he was 82 years old so by this point in the story he'd be 89. ^.^

hello! i most say i've been waiting for your up date eagerly. your story is so cool that it has me checking the site almost every day in hope to read more. i'm glad that someone else realices just how strong and serious wolfram really is. i love the way he is proud, hotheaded,stubborne, and loyal to a fault; specially his meanstreak, and his sarcasm. i've been wondering were the hell is yuri, but "seen" wolfram go through so much is well worth it. i'm really looking foward to "watch" him "suffer" through this world some more quite a lot more, i mean the sooner he finds yuri the sooner the fic ends, and we don't want that right. any way congrats in being such a good writer, i hungrily wait for more i'm with you all the way and my compliments on working out the paradox as well it was awsome and it ranks very high among my favorites. ja ne ^_~

Loved it! Yay! You updated! Have to say i'm loving where this is going too. lol. That is if it goes where I think it does. lol. (Thanks for the petting. I needed alittle comfort. lol.) Too much work and no fanfiction makes chrono a dull girl.

“Because Faraya is my brother,”

He was ready to submerge the entire planet into bloodshed just to find Yuuri.

“I’ll

deal

with consequences later.” ~~famous last words!~_^!


“I’m sorry Kyota, but you’ll have to be my boyfriend,” he hissed softly. “I can’t take this anymore!”

Kyota laughed loudly at the declaration. He grinned at Wolfram then. “No problem, babe,” he said, smacking Wolfram on his backside, the loud slap crossing the tavern happily, his palm molding around the curvy buttock.

Wolfram stared at Kyota,

his half-drunken mind not comprehending what had just occurred here.

“Here, the declaration is now official,” Kyota winked.


it seems poor Wolfram himself set this whole unfortunate chain of events into motion ... and as he stated earlier...he'll have no choice but to

deal

with the consequences...

...and deal with them...

he shall....

NOW ...

...now that he's in the hands of the one person he'd been seeking this entire time...

be careful what you wish for...

WOH-WHO another chapter, it's getting interesting now. Can't wait for the next one =3