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for Watch out for the Green Eyes

by chayron

schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok its still great i love this story to som uch come on its addicting i check every week to see if its been updated hey can't blame a sister for liking such a good story i love your writing style alot its really good you should write your own books you'll get a really good deal hey i'll be the first one to buy your book if u ever write one someday. update soon kay ^_^
person alicem
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update. While it was sad that Amae went with Fayea, I wasn't suprised. Will he stay with him or go back to Shin Makota?

Yuuri and Wolfram are really cute together. So sad that there is only 1 more chapter. Will you be continuing the series with a completely new story? I hope so.

On another note I have tried to join the forum but I don't knoe how to answerthe last question. if anyone has any ideas please feel free to email me.
person yuuri-eiri@hotmail.com
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wolfram is yuuri's babe ^^.... will be waiting next chapter, ah, and Merry Christmas and a happy (yeah!) new year for you and your family and friends, you're one of my favorite writers, bye ;)
person chrono_ofdarkness
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Sorry I haven't been on here lately, too busy with school, but hot damn i missed alot. lol. Wow. This story progressed so much while i was gone. I love it and i can't wait to see how you finish it.
person klausolas
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad uuri is back. I missed him. Is Wolfram ever going to tell Yuuri what happened to him and Amae at Faraya's hands?
person Razion
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I'm on Chapter 24 now! XDDD

Firstly, dang, Yuuri's so awesomely sweet! I love the way he treated Wolfram! Made me go "Aww". Perhaps its just me but I always like it when a couple ends up like that. ^^ I'm so glad they got back together again!

And then on to Kyota and Amae! Those two are a whole different issue. I don't think I've ever found myself being a fan of such a couple but you pull it off perfectly and have got me totally on the fan bandwagon. (The fanwagon? XD Hehe) I love the way you've been writing Amae. He's just so sadly tragic I feel like squishing him, but he probably wouldn't appreciate that. Kyota on the other hand is lovable but in a "You REALLY need to be whacked on the head" kinda way. Everytime he falls into the angst hole that Amae digs I feel like shaking him vigorously while totally understanding what kind of character he is. XD Come to think of it, Amae needs a good shaking too! Poor guy has had such a tough life he probably can't really deal with kindness and genuine emotions anymore. XDD

Ahh! Off to read the rest. T_T Nooo, you've got me tied to my computer with your geniusness! XD
person Razion
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO I should totally be shot and resurrected and SHOT ONCE MORE! O_o I didn't come back to your story for quite a while and look at all the wonderfulness I missed! AGGGHH! >.< I just finished reading Chapter 21 and really love what you did with Kyota and Amae's relationship! I was totally rooting for Wolfram and Amae and you completely turned that around for me! XDD Very nicely written tension and angst.

Ahh, dreams! XD I get really weird ones every now and then. Mostly I find myself running and hiding from things like giant Tabula Rasa monsters. Sometimes I don't even know what I'm running from. I just run. >.< Lately I've been losing quite a bit of sleep though. The evil exams are coming up, I'm finding it hard to study and am just generally afraid and frustrated.

Yosh! I'm gonna go study and then let myself read the next chapter of your story during my break. XD Gives me something really great to look forward to. Thanks for putting all the effort you have into this!
person rowen raven
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So is Amae having second thoughts? Now that he is out he doesn't know what to do, I'm interested in what will the conversation between faraya and Amae be like. Amae thinks he will need mental treatment, what he doesnt know is that he already does, and kyo too. I loved Amaes self proclameid masochism, and how he so casually told yuri that they wheren't fucking. Is sweet seeing wolf and yuri together again, they talked a bit but I guess there is still a lot more to say. How much does yuri really know about what happened to wolfram. I thought he wouldn't like Amae, that he would be a little jealous, but to accuse wolfram of infidelity, is going way over board, knowing how wolf feels, me wolf I'd torch the idiot. If he reacts like this to Amaes presence then he would flip if he ever finds out what faraya did, and I don't think any peace treaty could save the other kings ass, would part of his wrath befall on wolf, if he finds out. Apart from that I think I have nothing else to say, wow thats a first, a relatively short review, may be I'll come up with some thing else later and write again. for now, ja ne.
person dawnmm
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
faraya being a good guy I dont think so. I want yuuri to find out what he did to wolfram and then beat the crap out of him and berating wolfram for following is just wrong yuuri is his husband i would follow also looking forward to what happens next
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaeh that was just peachy update soon k.

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