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for Watch out for the Green Eyes

by chayron

schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O I can't believe I could fall so far behind. O_O

I'm still loving the story as much as I was in the first couple of chapters (maybe even more now that Yuuri found Wolfram ahhhh me being a sucker for the two together....:P) and I am happy that you kept going, even though I didn't for quite a while.

I keep wondering what's going to happen next, and it's great to be caught up again, and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Yay.
person naoko144
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like said, I'm a puddle!! xDD KYAAA!!! but oh wait...does Amae still like faraya or suomething!!?? oO urgh! I don't get him here...I wouldn't want to see that fucker...unless he wants to try and kill him?? but don't let faraya hurt him kay xD I like amae's stuborness and something irony and sarcastik tone^^'' mouahah! (but wolf mah fav XD) and I hope he get better soon.. I'm just surprise that faraya wasn't too bigmoutted about wolf oO OMAHGAWD!! I'm sure you'll let yuuri know, say please!! xDD I just want to know how he would react when he learn that fraraya had caught him and made him his concubine and the most, fucked him xDD

amae must accept kyota's proposition too TT.TT buhuh!! (bad me that reads at school...anyway xD)

ooh, say, you'll have the next chap soon hu?^^!! (tho take your time to make it good x3) I can't wait to read the answers to my question x3 (oi, I didn't really get it but when wolf is full power,is he more powerful than faraya?? I know yuuri his but wolf?)
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* It was quite a sweet chapter. Especially the ending. The quiet, tender moments are the scenes that I always look forward to reading whenever I read your writings (aside from the hot, sexy shagging stuff, of course, LOL!). It was a very good chapter, and I do hope you update soon. :)
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank god he's not dead man i was going into a overdrive then i was going to commit suicide by depriving myself of yaoi for a month that would of killed me but it's good to now husband and wif...er husband is back togehter! YAY! KAWAII!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELLO,Uhm... Yuuri is the best: “There wasn’t a minute that I wouldn’t be thinking of you.”

“Yeah, two months without sex makes one see things differently, ne?” Wolfram muttered, still not turning to Yuuri.
^^ will be waiting for the next chapter...:D
person mimi-chan
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't even realize that we are up to that chapter already time flies. I think you have done a good job of putting it all out there, not many people can do epics. To be honest I have never liked the Kyota/Amae pairing which I mentioned in a previous review but other people seemed to love it and I thought you had that pairing in mind which is why I mentioned a possible sequel with them too. Speaking of Amae *squeals* I am not sure if this was intentional or not but it seems like he has a thing for Yuuri, I mean with the way he was assessing him in the hospital room and also the way he totaly flipped on Kyota after he met Yuuri. Seeing as how he used Kyota, which he really didn't have to because Wolfram probably would have brought him to Shin Makoka anyway. And I thought maybe the little comment Wolfram made about his and Yuuri relationship when Yuuri left was foreshadowing. Anway I could be just over analyzing things 'cause it seems to fit the recent events as far as Amae's behavior goes, and makes for a good read but that is just me. I will definitely be on the look out for the sequel though too bad they don't have author alerts or something of that nature here.
person Webtester01
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Great couple of capters (23 & 24). I like how Amae and Kyota are finally working things out.


Wolfram and Yuuri finaly are getting through Wolframs's near-death experience.


Keep up the great work. :)

person naoko144
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to know that there wn't be any death ^^! (and of course, I'm really over joyed each time I read your fic, I wonder why^^''must be because I like it so much x3)And then, I'm also wondering...will Yuuri know one day about what Faraya did to wolfram xD (and wolf must kill faraya, sooo or at east deal with him great...Yuuri will have to let him kick faraya's btt xDD)

Ooooh my my, Kyota and Amae really are having it rough between them. But Amae is fucked up because He like Kyota but want to be like wolf and yuu with kyota, but think that it'll never be possible or something?? (I'm started thinking of amae being all emo oO OMG!! Noooo). I wnder if, if they end together, kyota would be able to love him as much as he had loved wolf and even more!^^

anyway!! xDD Yeah for cute moment!! (I was really relieved to know wolf was alive and all good, and like almost giggling when yuuri came and had dismissed kyota and amae and had the cute fluffy moment! but, xD seriously, wolf has strange habits, wanting to eat meat after only started to get conscious and in good shape^^'' tho I'm no better xDD!!

Woot, I want chapter 25 now xDD hehe!
person Rowen Raven
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well after two month of hell he has his yuri back! I'm wondering what kind of compromise will they reach concerning farayas future, Wolf wants him dead as soon, painfuly and horribly posible, I don't think yuri would aprove, wich will piss wolf off greatly, since it is personal. I sill feel daft for not realising that yuri could jump between worlds, but this being so, yuri's desaperence in the firts place was an accident or was it on purpuse, why did yuri went to that other world to beging with? and how did he realiced that wolf had followed him, or was it that when he went back wolf was gone? They are so sweet yuri and wolf! Now Amae and Kyo are really fucked up in the head, Amae is not the easyest person in the world. But I comend Kyo for trying to take example from yuri and be reasonable, if only to explode in the end, but he did try. Oh and why is wolf so scared of, what makes him think there is something wrong in his relationship with yuir? Does he think yuri will be jealous about Amae or is it that he is concered that he will find out about what faraya did to him? waht has got me puzzeled as well is that look that kyo saw in yuri's eyes when he regarded Amae, what was that look about? There is a lot going on here, I can't keep my mind fron going in circles trying to figure everything out, wondering to where all of it will lead every character, yuri, wolf, kyo, amae, and even faraya but only because I want him as dead as wolf. God I'm so daft! ta!
person dawnmm
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am anxiously awaiting what yuuri did to faraya and if he knew what he did to wolfram. I wonder where yuuri has been this whole time and what that look in his eye was that kyota had to think about, I'm hoping not lust my suspicions are anger for not keeping wolfram safe

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