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I really got a huge kick out of this chapter. I love the interaction between Kyota and Amae, I love the way Yuuri and Wolfram are with each other. It's wonderful. I'm eager to see where you take the story next, what happens between Amae and Kyota.. whether they figure it out or not. I wanna see what happens with Faraya, and what Yuuri does when he figures out what the scum did to his husband.

I eagerly await the next chapter of this wonderful story. I'm sorry to say however that I don't have h fanart to give you just yet - work has been busy and I don't want to rush through the pic - I've been working hard on it.

Wtih Fond Regards,
Ducky

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FInally~! Yuuri makes an APpearance~! Love the last quote~! I hope Yuuri makes Faraya pay for what he's done...

And there he goes! ^-^ I had decided to bug you with Yuuri's appareance if he didn't make it to chapter 25 but looks like I won't have to do it!

I read your story in one go. What with school and everything, it has taken me almost three days, phew! I can't bring myself to panic about Wolfram, though. I'm sure Yuuri won't let him die. I'm dead curious has to what he has been doing all this time but I figure you'll tell us later so...

Anyway, I really like it and hope you'll update soon!!!...it'll haunt my dreams for the next few days...no pressure ^-^v

Yeah Yuuri is here, I am so excited I can finally exhale its the moment I have been waiting for. I love his concern for Wolfram, although it is painful to see Wolf acting so defeated, he needs to get his fighting spirit back. Can't wait to see Yuuri kick Faraya's ass. It also was nice to see people's shock over the way Wolfram reacted when Yuuri was there, just goes to show how strong their bond is and the fact that they don't share it with anyone else. I was never a big Yuuri/Wolfram fan, rather a Con/Yuu fan so I was really reluctant to read this series and I really liked WOTP which made me check out this one. So I thought it was ironic that the same reason that made me not want to read it in the first place is the same reason why my liking for this sequel kind of dwindled some. To be honest there were a good number of parts that were skipped over because I thought the whole harem arc was kind of long and soon got tiring, it started to make me feel like I was watching one of those movies which in general is fairly good but has a good number of boring parts that you skip over to get to the good part again. Besides I thought it had too much focus on Amae, not that he is a bad character but at times it was like just who is the main character here. Well I guess here we are at the good part again so it will go back up on my fics to look forward to list. I look forward to the next chapeter, really interested in seeing Wolfram heal and go back to his old self, this is not a good look for him. And can't wait for Yuu/Wolf to have their happy every after besides I am also really interested on seeing how things are back home being that time does go by really quickly there. You seem to have a good number of Amae fans maybe you might want to think about a branch after this one ends dealing with his life in Shin Makoku and his relationship with Kyota.

Nooooooooooo plez don't let wolfram die i don't want to cry plez don't let a miracle happen or something i couldn't handle wolfram dieinghe's one of my favorite characters i don't want yuuri to be sad he need him they need each other plez don't let him die.

Ookayy, this chapter was filled with harsh trues & unexpected events. I most say that Kyo & Amae are in desperate need of ethics concerning the mourning of the dead, & the respect of the almost dead. Yeah I know that reallity is hard to face some times, & that they like each othe, but to go shagg to forget that Wolf is diying is unconciderate, it kind of pissed me off & I was strocked with some mild twisted sence of glee, when their shagg turned out to be unfullfiling & unsatisfying, they should be ashame of themselve, Amae does it to secure his safety, but what is Kyo's excuse, that was cold, from both of them. who let yasai loose? I was wondering what had happend to him but I expected he'd be kept prisoner in a tent, tied up and gaged, not roaming around watering horses. I don't want to be anywhere near Faraya when he wakes up & finds he lost the battle, the sucker. The must shocking event, Yuri strolling through the camp, as if nothing had happened. & What kind of greeting is that, "you look, awfull" "what happened?" Fucking Jesus sodding Christ on a bloody cross! it wouldn't hurt to show a little joy. Wolf was besides himself with joy, and even thoug he is diying the idiot in him had a fit of glee upon seeing yuri. I bet wolf is regreting the events that had ocurred, but being Wolfram I belive he thinks himself lucky for being able to see his husband one last time. Now I demand to know where the fuck was the stupid wimp, to beguing with, what was he doing while Wolf raided the country, looking for him. Oh & the gate, that was priceless, you are telling me that the wimp was able to cross between worlds as he pleases? Ok forget that, I mean if he can jump from the demon kindom to earth & viceversa why not from the demon kindom to this other place? & why hadn't I thought about it before? I feel kind of stupid. I'm diying to see the "serious talk" yuri is going to give to wolf, about the war & all, & For kyo to know that yuri just came & went takeing wolf, I wonder will yuri scowl kyota too, & what will he think of Amae? Also who will they deal with the situation on this world, I mean I'm sure yuri will come back to collect if not Kyota then Asami & Arachi, but will he just come, get them & head back or will he do something concerning the war, will there be a show down between faraya & yuri? & more importantly will he alow Wolf to come with him? I guess the story has reached it peak, the rest will come down & falling in to place for now on. God I can't wait for the next one!! ja ne!

KYAAAAA!!!! YEAH!!!! xDDDDD!! okay, even if the situation is critique..I am jus jumping like crazy in mah head and shouting HURAY!! YUURI RETURNED!!! (in mah head cause it's like...two in in the morning xD) anyways, YIPPII!! I LOVED this chapter also^^ but Ihope that it won't only be sex between kyota and Amae. AND! wolf has to LIve kay xDD I like happy end..(screw deathfic xDD)anyway, I don't mind how it will trun out, since it is too good x3 (Imma a addict, did I already told?) but I would like it better if it didn't ended as a death fic...but I suppose Yuuri bring wolf to the hospital to get blood transfusion since he lost to much of it?? ne???or something like this (I'm just trying to guess).
Anyway, will the next chap be the last?? T.T I Hope not!!! Faraya has to die by wolf's hand first xDDD (is having losta scenery and ways to torture in mind) >3

Thank you for this GREAT chapt... Yuuri is back, YAY!... update soon please!!! Yuuram!!!

thats a switch wolfram caring for everyone else. wonder why his healing power not working? isnt yuuri at full strength now even though he's on another world? im glad yuuri is back but anticipating the problems you were hinting at. And why shouldnt wolfram come after his husband i would. looking forward to more thanks.

oi, how can I get you into story alert?? must you need my e-mail? if so, here it is, in case^^'' but my username here is also naoko144 (altho I haven't had any story here yet =.=)
yohko_kurama2004@hotmail.com
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oooh, I oved that chapter too XDD (had started writing comment before and after reading now) Kyota is soo messed up, but at least its a start x3!!! I just hope that it will be happy ending for amae at least, he hasn't it easy ^^'' nor does Kyota (he really look messed up oO serious) oooh, and as for yuuri...I can't wait too hera bout him xD!
anyway, it was a good change of pace, having a chapter not base only on wolf, but more on kyota and amae^^ (tho I LOVE wolfram, it's good to know more and follow other character time by time^^)

anywya, I say that you do a good job for this x3 keep it up! I always am hasty to know what will your next chap be and what it'll be and happening and all x3