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Thank you for the updates!

Yessss, I would very very much like yaoi dreams of all of them but sadly I don't get awesome dreams like that. *sigh*

And whoa, I can really see the misdirected mis-expressed interest Kyota has for Amae. It's kind of sweet in a tough love way but nonetheless, I think he really deserves a smack on the head for putting poor Amae through all that. I think Amae's breakdown was just what he needed to put some sense into him!

>.< Poor Wolfram, to have to deal with so much and still be so dead worried about Yuri. >.<

Thanks again for putting all the effort you have into this!

Sorry for the double review and misnaming!

For the record, I really hope Kyota and Amae end up together. Those two have this weird chemistry going on!

HI i love this chapter, actually your whole story!
But i hope you think twice and let yuri know of wolframs rapping!
I would really like to see how yuri will react.
Could you arrange this? Please!!!!

I`m looking forward to your next update!
bye

It seems a little more of Kyota is revealed in this chaper. I get the impression that he likes Amae, but has some issues he needs to work out.

I hope Wolfram will modify those two soldier's punishment. It seems extreme.

I wonder if Asami will ever 'sample the other side' with all the stuff going on in his life. I guess that will never happen.

Keep up the great work. :)

Ah my gawd, I love you fic xDD but I'm getting a tad impatient as to when will they have a clue about yuuri?? It's getting a bit long and I'm wondering too much and then I want to know the rest, what will happen and all but what about yuuri, I can't wait to know when you'll let them have some clue, or ways to know that he's alive and will he learn about what faraya did to Wolf?? will there be war?? What is Kyota's problem with mae?? Arg so much question xDD!! Anyway, take your time, your doing a wonderful job here^^ (Imma addicted completely xDD!!)


sorry for the crappy english^^'' it's not my motherlanguage^^''

I really enjoyed your first story before this one. I'm trying to get into this sequel, I just can't seem to get into it at all. I mean it seems like it's just dragging and dragging. But overall, your story is really different and I give a 10 for it. But I think that story should just end before it becomes even more of a drag, I hope that this story isn't one of those. I shall wait to see what you have in stores for us. Hope that it works out in the end.

Kyoto is just awful. He obviously is attracted to Amae and dosen't know what to do about it other than to fight with him, a bad choice.

At least they are out of the harum and safe from the King at this time. Can't wait till chapter 23 when they find Yuuri.

alice

that was a good ending i like the fact the wolfram is disciplining kyota but i still think they are going to get together. I'd like to learn more of who they are fighting for and some hint of yuuri on the world. But its your story and you are doing great i wait in anticipation for every chapter. With what kyota did to his men i kept thinking maybe wolfram should do it to kyota for a day just for him to see what amae and he went through in the harem. maybe not so much the sex but the helplessness. again and always thanks for sharing

No, no, no! While not exactly clear it seems as though you may have been leaning towards Kyota/Amae, but how about Arachi/Amae and/or Kyota/Asami. I know you said earlier in the story that Asami is straight, but then after they landed in the other world Asami's opinion of Wolfram and Kyota had changed, and there was playfulness between the two. Besides with how long Wolfram was gone and Kyota/Asami left together with Arachi, there is a whole time frame for them to get closer. I just think after Kyota being still hooked on Wolfram it would be too wierd if he fell for someome he just met after pining for Wolfram for all that time and it would be nice to see the best friends get together.

As for Amae, I think that he needs love bad, as far as needing to be loved and being in love goes because he never had that. Arachi seems like a really nice guy and would be good for him. Someone who would support and cherish hime while he is learning more about the world and himself. Wolfram, Yuuri, etc. can provide him with the friendship type love he needs and Arachi the other. I don't know I guess the whole Kyota/Amae is just wierd for me because personality wise and needs wise they just don't seem to click, oh well. Nevertheless I am happy that Wolfram is still missing and loving Yuuri, I miss him too and happy that we are going to see him soon. I know the fic is mainly about Wolfram but it just isn't the same without Yuuri I guess because he brings so many aspects to a story himself. Oh and any updates on what the other three were doing while Wolfram was imprisonned besides looking for him, its kind of wierd not knowing anything when everything about Wolfram stay at Faraya's was so detailed.

I just knew they would start with the wrong foot! I can't seem to decide who has the sharpest tongue Wolf, Kyo or Amae. Did Kyo really got that pissed about Amae's comment on him likeing Wolf? I mean is kind of obvious. And what the hell is Kyota waiting to give Wolfram his wedding bracelet back? I agree with Yasai when Faraya finds out they've all been had he's going to flip! Even if it wasn't meant to be, I found it very sweet, the way Wolf reasured Amae that he would keep his promise, and is it just me or they seem to be warming up to each other? I was wondering how strong is Kyo's dislike for Amae, will he be actually cruel enough to trow to the others face that he is mearly a concubine? Will Wolfram have to interfere to defend one or the other and be able to keep the peace between his companions? I'm looking foward to the next chap how much is Wolfram going to tell Kyota about what happened in the castle? This is just getting better and better!
I know you wont belive this, but I've never post anything anywhere, Like I've said before I'm tecnologicaly retatded, I'm a paper and pencil kind of person, my computer has very few uses as it is. Typing homework, doing info search for homework, reading fics from three main sites, and other minor two where a few stories I'm interested are posted in their unedited versios. I just got an e-mail acount of my own like three weeks ago, I was using my mom's before that, I know pathetic. So as a result I don't know of anyplace to post pictures or how it is done, another thing is my inferiority complex, I'm not sure if I'm good enough, I wouldn't want to hurt peoples eyes by my atteps to artistic expretion. But I'll whenever I have the time and when I've finished the drawing on your stories, the two I told you about are still rough drawings, but I'll send them your way, along with a few others of my best, now that I have your permition to send them to your e-mail. I know it sounds silly but I try not to invade people's personal territory, including there phone num, and e-mails, yes I'm socially ill adapted! Well I get to that as soon as I can, school and work are being hell lately. Oh and you don't mind my calling your character by nicknames, am I getting to familiar with them? Until next time, ja ne!