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I've been reading this story for quite a while. I love it!

Amae sure got some spunk XD. And I know that it would be great to have Kyota x Amae: sort of a battle among players to give up the heart? But I still wonder about Amae's commitment to Faraya. Though he says he hates him and so on.. Faraya does have a sort of twisted love for him... Though, obviously Amae deserves a second life in Shin Makoku.. *dreamy eyes* I don't know what to choose. But obviously I'm not the author ^_~
Thank you so much, for giving us this wonderful original story.

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It gets better and better. I bet Kyota and Amae will find some things in common. ;)

But when Yuuri and Faraya clash, it will be big I'm sure.

:D

this was so great after all that time in with the concubines to see wolfram really start to shine again -- i'm guessing that you are going to have kyota and amae get together (i hope so they seem made for each other) their interaction so far is great. looking forward to the next chapter thanks for sharing

I'm so glad that Wolfram is out of the Harum and that he took the young Mazoko with him. I can't wait till he finds Yuuri. I wonder if Amae ends up to be Yuuri's son? I hope not cause that will mean he has been there for over 20 years.

Hope to see an update soon.

alice

YESSSSS thank you for updating! ^^ *sighs happily* Amae's being totally droolworthy again, adapting to the situation and proving that he can take what's dished at him. *fangirls*

Hehe, I like how Wolfram misunderstood Amae's motives for the picture. That's really classic. It's also good to see Wolfram kicking ass in the fighting department again. The way he thinks on his feet is so fitting of the Maou's consort. Really, if I didn't like the YuuRam pairing so much I'd be rooting for WolframXAmae right about now. Okay, so I actually am rooting for them now but still... XDD

Thanks again for writing this! I hope I get to read the next part soon. Your story's an excellent bed time read (it's an excellent all-time read) and really gets me happy before I sleep.

hiya
thanks so much for doin this.^_^
i hav just come into the story and i find it rele intersting. i hop u carry on doin it.
is there goin to be a big war/battle and yuuri will show up or will they find him or not at all.
will wolfram final get to kill the king guy ( i hav a rele mad memory for names ) and will he and the other people he is gettin away without gettin found out? will the guy from the palace and the guy from wolframs world get along or will they give eachother weird looks and stuff? well i hop they we be at each others throats. hehe tat is prob just me ^_^
i rele wont to no wat happens so could u plz keep writing. ^_^
soz for the bad english it is just the was i am used to writin

Awsome story! I really enjoy it. Keep it up. ;)

That kept me tense trough all of it, wow, I'm still holding my breath, Wolf realy is the skillful tactician, the man is the weapon of the great demon kindom like Murata so eloquently puts it is the early chapters. It took me by surprise that he took Yasai and I think he will come to regret that choise, as for Amae, let Kyota handle him, I can't wait until they meet, is just that Amae is so diferent to Wolfram who Kyota bilived to be his one and only love, that I can imagine he will be somewhat exaspereted by the guys antics. I comgratulate you that was a very well planed scape, I'm dying to see them arrive to a relative safety of his conrads in arms side. Obviously the scape from the castle will not be the last they will hear from Faraya. I'm pretty sure there'll be hell to pay for scaping him, I guess he will try to hunt them down if only to kill them with his own two hands. Well I draw in the jap anime style, I've been drawing since I was very little and not only have I impruve greatly I have also evolve in focus, at fist they were ramdom things, I still do but meinly it turne to the characters of the stories in my head, for some reason they are easyer to put on to paper that way than with words, at first the character were mostly teens and mythical creatures as fays and merfolks, the stories basicaly romance, so the drawings pretty much suck. Then I did some fanart nothing great realy, now I'm mainly back at my own characters but this time they vary from teens to mid twenties most of them guys, I have some pretty impresive angels and demoness, some cool vamps,and some very cute and sexy looking geisha boys, but I think that my real passion and the main focus for the rest of the time or at least for a while is gay erotica, basicaly I draw my male caracters doing the nasty. Very explisit I may add. I'm currently working in a collection of drawings of one of my favorite novel series, by michael schielbein, vampire vow, vampire thrall and vampire transgression, very good novels, I recomended to anyone who likes gay vampiers and has a diferent if not more objecvite view on the christian religion, defenetly not for those who are very religious or with high set moral values or belives, it treats very srong not to say blasphemous subjects. those particular pics are in a combination of jap anime style and a more traditional portrait kind of drawing, they are not perfect but they don't make the queen cry either. And I did'n want to spoil the surprise but since you asked I'm also back to fanart, with my new honed skills and they are not half bad, defenetly much better then the once I did a few years back, and among my fanart proyects I'm working on some pics of your kkm stories so far I've oly got the rough sketsh of two scenes on wotp, and I hope to do a lot more, I have no clue how to get them for you to be able to see them so if you could give me a few pointers, like I'm a retarded five year old, I'd be very please and in your dept, I realy would like for you to see them, but I don't know how. I'm glad to know that there will be a third part for the story and I'm confident in your skills, you are makeing me repeat myself you are the best there is up till now so go for it! ja ne ^_^

Ok.. ok.. so I can't stay away.. *lowers head* This story has seriously taken ahold of me though. I keep thinking about Amae and Kyota meeting and running through all these possible scenarios in my head. Like for example, I was thinking that they might not like each other right away - especially if Kyota catches on that Amae has a thing for Wolfram. I've been pitching the idea around in my head for a while though and I really do want to see them together. I think Amae is Kyota's match, water to fire. The idea of them getting together makes me giddy, I want them both to be happy, I want Kyota's passion (flashback to the almost sex scene) to go to good use. Jeez, well anyway.. I drew another picture. ^_^

Amae and Kyota.. ---> http://dukgrrl.deviantart.com/art/I-m-going-to-kiss-you-now-66107427

I just absolutely love this story. When will Wolfram meet up with Yuuri and I wonder how long he had actually been in this world? Will he remember Wolfram and will he be alright?

Can't wait to find out.

alice