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by MrsTsukiyono

person Arisun
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait until you post the next part. I can't wait to see how you deal with Ryoma's recovery after he's safe.
person Keria
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You can't just leave it there . I so Can't wait till you put up the sescond part please let it be soon. oh and is there a way to put me on your alert email or something? If so please to thank you
person Cere
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is really well written. I love the way you ended this part. Poor Ryoma though... oh well at least Muraki is hot, although I like him better with Tszuki XD Looking forward to the next part. Have a wonderful summer. ^_^
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was good at first but now its no so good.
person Izayoi
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Ryoma. I love him (and all the other PoT characters). I hope to see the next chapter soon. Your story is one of the best I've ever seen! Lots of love!
person dawnmm
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great scary sad angst ridden need more
person Izayoi
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Poor Ryoma, he is such a cutie and don't deserve any of that! Anyway, please update soon!
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, things most certainly have changed in a span of two years. Don't worry about the angst, I enjoy it. ^_^ I can seriously imagine Fuji as you described him in this chapter, being scary and all. I'm looking forward to seeing Kevin and Ryoga in the next chapter along with the developements of the various Tenipuri characters. GGreat work as usual, please update soon.
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sad...! By the end with Syusuke and Yuuta, I was seriously in tears. Great job as usual, please update soon.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
blkcat, yes, I was informed via e-mail who he was, but thanks!

My god, poor Ryoma... although... thinking about what Katzutaka looks like... I really wouldn't mind switching places with Ryoma. XP
Once again, I really must compliment your writing style. I honestly could see the events from this chapter playing almost like a movie through my head. At the end of this chapter, you note how Katzutaka is a doctor and knows how to "torture you with only his hands". Do you mean the use of things like pressure points... or something more along the lines of beating the crap out of Ryoma?

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