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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this fic has started brilliantly. You didn't have A and S clawing each others backs up right off the bat, drawn out is much much better. You control the characters without any flaw that I could see. No awkward dialogue, whew.
I see creativity here, the capri-sun blood bag, wonderful stuff, keep that up :)
Just take your time, I'll be keeping my eyes on this fic for updates, long live AxS
Chiao,
TEOATG&B
I see creativity here, the capri-sun blood bag, wonderful stuff, keep that up :)
Just take your time, I'll be keeping my eyes on this fic for updates, long live AxS
Chiao,
TEOATG&B