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What a delightful story. How nice of Kritiker to push the rest of Weiss into supporting Schu. :) I really like your characterizations of all the guys, especially the way that they will set aside their own opinions and concerns in favor of keeping their friendships and working relationships intact. Thanks for sharing tis story.

Now I have to admit to being completely spoiled, and absolutely loving it! I suppose Kritiker's attempt was inevitable, but I love how Weiss pulled together as a united team. Fascinating plot, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. I am most in love, however, with the way you write such gems as Aya rounding on Yohji "with a look he had usually reserved for members of Omi's estranged family." Truly priceless, not to mention the delight of Yohji's and Omi's respective responses -- both to the look and to Aya's response to Schuldig's actions. Just as I thought those concluding paragraphs in that chapter couldn't possibly be topped, you have such insightful gems in the next chapter like the descriptions of Schuldig's telepathy sliding through Aya and Aya's frustration about Schuldig's moods, and his determined refusal to admit to any sort of weakness or need -- not noticing how much that applies to others' observations of himself. Th ank you so very much for this story and your rapid updates!

So many wonderful chapters, such a terrific story! I wanted to try spreading out the reading of the new chapters to assure that I would have something to look forward to until your next update -- but couldn't help but to devour them immediately. Somehow you make this crazy situation work perfectly, while keeping everyone delightfully in character.

Wow this is so very good.i just love it. more please .

I fear getting spoiled, but thank you! I loved the epiphanies and the humor, but most of all I love how you've made Aya and Schuldig into the perfect pairing.

Oh wow this just gets better and better.i still want more please.

oh please write more

Hurray, three new chapters, each just as terrific as the ones that came before. For all that Aya has sometimes been referred to as a feral alley cat, Schuldig more truly defines the analogy. Poor Aya has quite a challenge in front of him, as of course, does Schuldig. Yuo've really captured, I think, the essence of Schuldig. I love that Aya is not intimidated by him, but is able to match him while remaining true to his character. All around terrific!

Oh wow, more please

This is delightful. I love the way Aya is fighting his better instincts and Schu is all bluster to hide a deeper hurt than the broken bones. I very much look forward to more.