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by selfproclaimedbeauty05

person Mieko
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really didn't think I would like this couple at all. I'm a big Yuki/Shuichi fan, but it really isn't that bad and I thank you so writing such a wonderful story with this pairing. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Normaly I hate stories where lovers cheat on each other, but for some reason I just love this one. I'm learning new things about myself. I hope you update soon and let me know when you do.
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are a very sick person because you did the one thing that hiro would never do to his best friend and that is just sick and wrong
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IF it is wrong then I don't want to be right. I love betrayal. It makes a great story.
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it please make another chapter i really would love it. please please please?
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have revised most of my errors. I am sorry for the mistakes. I need to get a beta, but I just don't have the time. Thanks for the reviews everyone. Please keep reviewing.
person Tsuichi
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The pairing you chose is one that I too would like to see more of. However, if this is the way you intend to continue writing, might I suggest looking for a Beta to review your work?
person mystice
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is something new... Yuki cheating on Shuichi, with his best buddy, no less... Gosh do update soon... i wanna see what a big mess this secret relationship makes and how Shuichi would react to this... But i gotta admit, Yuki doing Hiro is just hot...! More! More!

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