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for The Killer in You

by Czmadzia

person Meg
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The first ending was best. And IMO I think you should've left it at that. :/
person shandy
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was nice. both versions. obviously too perfect an outcome but what else if fanfic for. i did hate the ending tho. misa annoys me and i'm sorry but there is absolutely no basis whatsoever in the anime or manga that light likes her at all. not to mention the l/light ending with flavour of l/light/misa. way to author fantasyish to me. i mean good god.that just kkilled it for me really.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, both endings are happy. I was a little disappointed that the second ending wasn't a "bad" version, but I think I prefer it over the happier first version anyway. Seems more... believable? Or at least more realistic, when considering Light's God complex. Ya know... This whole story seems to be one big example of how addiction can change a person. Even if the addiction is (relatively) guilt-free genocide. *smirks*

Anyway, I really did enjoy this fic. I'm glad I came back to the fandom, in spite of the series being licensed. I forgot how much I enjoy reading the fan fiction!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree that the second version is much more true to the series, but I adored both. Thank you for sharing your story with all of us.
person Kaioh
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a really nice story - cleaver plot, besides after reading it left me with a pleasant feeling. I am so very happy that at least one story about Death Note doesn't end with tragedy and angst. Bravo!
I would also like to express my wish for more fanfiction about the pair L/Light? Normaly I don't like yaoi very mich, but theese two just seem so right together... Thanks! :)))
person Olka
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I think it's one of the best stories in DN fandom I've read so far, my friend. Good gracious, I'm so sorry I didn't review it sooner :-(
I love your L, he is... L-ish, if you know what I mean :-D
But I still want to strangle Ryuk, moreover, I seriously doubt that I will ever cease to.
Ola
person Spamilla
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ Fabulous work! Very good, indeed!
person Blutsauger
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sprytna sprawa z tym rozdzieleniem akcji. lubię, kiedy wszystko kończy się dobrze, jak w pierwszym przypadku, ale z drugiej strony oglądanie Lighta jako prawdziwego Kirę... mwahaha. bezcenne. czekam na zakończenie :D
person Nusku
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always
person oriya
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your fanfic in one of the best DN fanfiction I've ever read! damn, plot, dialogs, L's though, his inner dilemma. Good, good so very good ^^. keep it I wont to see how it all ends (and I can't imagine Light with Misa either...)

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