rate_review Reviews

Hello!

I really like your story! the first chapter got me hooked. I find it sweet, that Light wants to convince himself that wanting a man is bad, but fails repeatedly ^^ It was clear that you don`t want to write a PWP, or otherwise the scenes in chap one would have been more graphic. I also appreciate this, I have had enough bad DN PWPs.

But I must say, the jump in chapter two irritated me at first. Chapter three and four made up for it, though. The thought, that Light is manipulted through the DN is comforting. Who likes people killing without feeling guilty anyway? His struggle to let go of his lover was heartwrenching, and him love must be very strong to even let himself detained again.

Keep the good work up!

My regards, Ivy

good update!
come back with more soon yeah

Very impressive! I like it a lot. Had I been around to check the site earlier, I would have reviewed then... ^^;; Your use of all the characters makes the story even more interesting, and I'm glad you took time to develop Light and L's relationship - it gives it more depth. Raito's conflict (concerning L's death) was refreshing; it's good to know that the true Light is still around.

I hope you continue soon!!

wow!! i love it!!!please update it soon this fic is excellent.!!!!

Wow, I'm surprised more people haven't reviewed yet. I like your story idea a lot and can't wait to read more.

WAH!!! SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!
I'M LITERALLY KICKING MYSELF TILL I CAN READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE COME BACK WITH MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!