rate_review Reviews

I loved it.

It was a bit chaotic but I think appropriate none the less for a drunk Schuldig. I liked this, it had some beautiful imagery.

first ficcie i've read in awhile. i liked it! little different from how i envision farf and schuldig, but then again that's why i read other peoples' fics. maybe sometime you could try something with them where they're not doing something so...done to death though? ^ ^ you're one of the few writers i've encountered where i'd like to see more in a different setting.

i had to re-read it twice to catch the Aya references. & your use of pronouns was often confusing. & then Brad's voice in there suddenly telling them Schu shouldn't drink anymore (didn't figure out it was a memory til the second read)......it was all VERY confusing.

but the voices & the characters & the scene were AWESOME. when i knew who was talking the dialogue was very good too. ^_^
i think my favorite line was: "One day, he would discover who gave the orders to have them stationed within a thousand mile radius of Weiss, tear them apart with a spoon and make them eat it."

& i love the fact that while Schu is "seeing" someone else who DOESN'T mean it, Farf DOES mean it when he said "i love you." ^_^ & u did a VERY good job all throughout of showing that he does -just through the gentle way the psychopath handles his inebriated friend.

Very nicely done. While telepaths are often empaths as well, the two are capable of being separated. It's wholly possible to be a telepath without being an empath and vice versa. It is, however, thought that both fire the same or very similar neurological chemicals in the brain. Sorry for the minor psych lesson. I'm rather glad the plot bunny bit you with this one.

I loved this, and the end part the most.