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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heyya! sorry, I haven't been reviewing since your last story... but I thought it was about time for me to drop in again. LOVED IT! the whole series. It's just so... YAY! *giant hug* bravo! bravo! Loved it!! ^^
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly wonderful. That Tasuki would think to use sex as a way to help calm his nerves and then flood Tamahome with his inner most feelings was beautiful. Very Tasuki. He's an emotional being, but isn't all that great at verbally expressing himself. He'd be more the type to show than tell.
I can't wait to sink my teeth into the third installment of this story line. I hope Tasuki gets the chance to snag some of Tamahome's powers in an attempt to save him from something. But, then again, knowing Tasuki he isn't going to wait for a reason to snag them.:D
Best of luck on creating the next part! I'll be right here reading and drooling along side you. *glomps the boys*
I can't wait to sink my teeth into the third installment of this story line. I hope Tasuki gets the chance to snag some of Tamahome's powers in an attempt to save him from something. But, then again, knowing Tasuki he isn't going to wait for a reason to snag them.:D
Best of luck on creating the next part! I'll be right here reading and drooling along side you. *glomps the boys*
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot. Anyway love that the boys are together and that Chichiri explained their connection. great chapter!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Did you say sequel....yippy!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They melted. It was pretty.
I must say that, while I'm an indepth lemon writer and love reading them, the flashes of passion we saw in this chapter make it seem as if we're witnessing something that can only be described in pieces. Almost like we were meant to read only the surface of their joining, while letting them keep the finer points and details to themselves. Almost like it was a joining that was never meant for human's eyes. Beautifully done, I don't feel like I've missed anything(as I tend to when lemons are only partially written).
I mentioned the bond being touch based because it's more romantic, I've always been and always will be a smut fan. (Once the prequle-one-shot to 'Duty' is beta'd you will see what I mean. ~_^)
I'm working through adding suggestions to 'Comfort' now, so I should have all of it done for you in the next few days. ^-^
I must say that, while I'm an indepth lemon writer and love reading them, the flashes of passion we saw in this chapter make it seem as if we're witnessing something that can only be described in pieces. Almost like we were meant to read only the surface of their joining, while letting them keep the finer points and details to themselves. Almost like it was a joining that was never meant for human's eyes. Beautifully done, I don't feel like I've missed anything(as I tend to when lemons are only partially written).
I mentioned the bond being touch based because it's more romantic, I've always been and always will be a smut fan. (Once the prequle-one-shot to 'Duty' is beta'd you will see what I mean. ~_^)
I'm working through adding suggestions to 'Comfort' now, so I should have all of it done for you in the next few days. ^-^
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Very hot. So hot that I am srooling right now. Keep up the good work. I am still on the firm side of Miaka swallowing her pride and realizing she was very immature and apologize to Tasuki.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! LOVE! Wonderful characterizations; Chichiri was perfect, Mitsukake(while usually left out) was well done, and Nuriko was FAB!
Sorry I'm late in reviewing, but I'm an idiot and for some reason was thinking that I'd already read chapter 2 when I hadn't. ^^; Gomen!
I really enjoyed the conversation between Chichiri and Miaka, the way he calmly and bluntly puts the information in front of her is very canon Chichiri. Kudos!
I can hardly wait to see chapter 4, gods, those boys need some time together even if it's just to hold hands and kiss a couple of times. Forgive me if I've assumed incorrectly about this 'bond' they are forming, but I'm thinking that it is based on touch, not just sexual activity(though I'm never gonna complain if they boink into next week. ~_^). So, even if they just share a tent and sleep holding hands or cuddled up together, they should be fine, na? Well.... I'm sure the bond will strengthen faster with physical love. :D
Love it, keep up the fantasitc work!
PS: Site is coming slowly but I'll get it up as quick as I can and send you the link. ~_^ Also, I could beta what you have posted and send it to ya when I'm done. That way, you can edit and re-work it as you have time. I know how it is with having babies around. ~_^ Mine's 8
Sorry I'm late in reviewing, but I'm an idiot and for some reason was thinking that I'd already read chapter 2 when I hadn't. ^^; Gomen!
I really enjoyed the conversation between Chichiri and Miaka, the way he calmly and bluntly puts the information in front of her is very canon Chichiri. Kudos!
I can hardly wait to see chapter 4, gods, those boys need some time together even if it's just to hold hands and kiss a couple of times. Forgive me if I've assumed incorrectly about this 'bond' they are forming, but I'm thinking that it is based on touch, not just sexual activity(though I'm never gonna complain if they boink into next week. ~_^). So, even if they just share a tent and sleep holding hands or cuddled up together, they should be fine, na? Well.... I'm sure the bond will strengthen faster with physical love. :D
Love it, keep up the fantasitc work!
PS: Site is coming slowly but I'll get it up as quick as I can and send you the link. ~_^ Also, I could beta what you have posted and send it to ya when I'm done. That way, you can edit and re-work it as you have time. I know how it is with having babies around. ~_^ Mine's 8
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was a wonderful chapter. I love Chichiri confronting Miaka with her selfishness and how much she has hurt Tama and Tasuki. Although I have to say if she ever wants Tasuki to forgive her, she'll have to grovel a little. After all he did almost die for her and she treated him like crap after finding out the two boys are together. I look forward to a great Tasuki/Tamahome reunion!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. My heart is breaking for Tama and Tasuki. I just wish that Miaka would realize that those two are meant to be together!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This is much better and more in-depth than the last fic. Kudous to you for coming up with such an ingenious plotline.
RE Miaka's reaction: I actually think it's a bit tame. Most likely, she'd have shot off at the mouth about Tasuki changing her 'sweet, and loving Tamahome' into a 'perverted freak'. But, I like the way you wrote it. She's angry and hurt and completely confused. Lovely job.
RE Tamahome/Tasuki pairings: There are far too few out there but that seems to be changing lately. I've seen several attempts to pair them up around here lately.
Also, I'm putting up a shrine for Tama/Tasuki fanfiction and fanart. All of my here-to-fore unreleased fiction will be posted there and I was going to ask if (after the site is up and you've had a moment to look around) you'd mind letting me host these two fics? If you'd like, I'll offer to beta them and perhaps we can edit the first one to include this new style of writing you've shown. Not a full re-write, but a full edit. Reading aloud helps sometimes. ~_^ My email is above, please feel free to shoot me a note.
<3 Yahnkey
RE Miaka's reaction: I actually think it's a bit tame. Most likely, she'd have shot off at the mouth about Tasuki changing her 'sweet, and loving Tamahome' into a 'perverted freak'. But, I like the way you wrote it. She's angry and hurt and completely confused. Lovely job.
RE Tamahome/Tasuki pairings: There are far too few out there but that seems to be changing lately. I've seen several attempts to pair them up around here lately.
Also, I'm putting up a shrine for Tama/Tasuki fanfiction and fanart. All of my here-to-fore unreleased fiction will be posted there and I was going to ask if (after the site is up and you've had a moment to look around) you'd mind letting me host these two fics? If you'd like, I'll offer to beta them and perhaps we can edit the first one to include this new style of writing you've shown. Not a full re-write, but a full edit. Reading aloud helps sometimes. ~_^ My email is above, please feel free to shoot me a note.
<3 Yahnkey