rate_review Reviews

Very interesting and erotic plot twist. I have no clue why they would do that in a cave while hiding away from Chinyisou (sp?) but thats the wonder of fanfiction. I wonder who each of them were thinking about. It would have turned out more romantic if they were actually thinking of each other. Also, that reference at the end about the 'indirect kiss' was a nice touch. Good job.

Oh! I like, I like, I like it a lot! <3 So very sexy and still decently in character!

So very sexy and still in character.