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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... Cool. Creepy, but cool. I can actually totally imagine this happenening. Very well done! ^-^
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!!!! this story is AWESOME! XD
you write VERY well. the first few paragraphs were difficult to figure out what was going on, but after that your voice rang out loud & clear. i loved the stress ball. ^_^
you write all 3 of them wonderfully.
i hope there's more coming to this. ^_^ How do those first few kills play out? & how does Schu control him? What problems might he run into with that?
& do they meet Nagi anytime soon?
you write VERY well. the first few paragraphs were difficult to figure out what was going on, but after that your voice rang out loud & clear. i loved the stress ball. ^_^
you write all 3 of them wonderfully.
i hope there's more coming to this. ^_^ How do those first few kills play out? & how does Schu control him? What problems might he run into with that?
& do they meet Nagi anytime soon?