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for Here comes the Rain again

by inuyoukai8

schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good, what happens when the host club finds out how she lost her fear of the storm?
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! This fic is hot and interesting. I like how you mix it up by using an unconventional pairing, and you make it fun. Using the thunder storm makes is nice and interesting. I'd like to see what the twins do after this, they're such fun troublemakers.

As always it's well written which makes it much more pleasant to read. One thing that is a little confusing is how you often have dialog from more than one character in the same paragraph. It makes it a little harder to figure out who says what, since the convention is to keep each characters lines in their own paragraph.
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say continue with twins, Yeah!
person Seloa
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blink blink* oh my god... I got, I don't know, almost half way through and someone called for me and broke that delicious reading spell. My first thought was... wow!... who the hell writes this?!

Oh my god this was so awesome. You write so well! I'll have to look for more stories by you. I always forget that Nekozowa-senpai is a hottie too. It's the shroud. ^-^
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is exactly what I needed. This is exactly what I needed to exist. When I saw that someone had written a dirty NekoHaru I did a double take, and verifying that it was true, squealed in fangirlish rapture. And it was so PERFECTLY written! Nekozawa, dark and smooth and sexy, taking control and setting the pace, exactly how I imagined he would act given this opportunity. Ah, I'm so happy you wrote this! A hundred kinds of sexy, I'm actually blushing! Great job!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...freaking'....god! Hot, hot, HOT! Loved it!
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still awsome the second time through ^^
person vampslyr
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, a very mature look at Nekozawa. Definitely a good read. You have a wonderful grasp of what makes a good het sex scene and very expressive writing skills. I'm quite impressed with this story and will have to bookmark it for the future.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! *fans self* There is just something about the image sex during a thunderstorm...and lots of candles...mmm, hot wax and lightening...*mops up drool*... This was hot, no question, and well written. I like this alpha Nekozawa! There just isn't enough Nekozawa love floating around, so thanks so much for writing this, its just great!

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