rate_review Reviews

Ah, god. This was last updated 2 years ago. I will cling to the hope that maybe, just maybe, you'll decide to pick this up again. I'm absolutely in love with your writing. Every perfect emotion and depiction of desperation pulls me in so hard that I get to the end of the fic and I haven't even realized that I'd been reading as long as I have.

Mello's obsession with L is absolutely indulgent. The first time I even realized the potential behind the idea was when I read your MattXMello story and then I went on to read the novel and just with the opening intro, I could totally see it as a possibility.

Just fucking gorgeous.

*licks the screen* You really should keep writing this. It's strange and twisted and fun, and yummy if you like that sort of thing. Kinda like aerosol cheese applied directly into the ear... someone else's ear.

so suspence, and it is making you very anxious to know and know more, in simple term this story gotten so ineresting i couldn't stop reading, well until the last part, lol. the plotline is very interesting, you mange to twist the real sequences into your own line and it really pulls me in, and you also added the part mello in fact had a crush on L, but everywhere Mello go you squeeze in Near, i am geting an impression Near likes mello (might not be your plot, lol) i just love the L and Light Yagami scenery, very romantic and the tension is unbearable, so please for the sake of your fan, update soon ^_^

Rain Asaki...
When it rains it pours, blood rain does not bring me agony, it brings me pleasure...

*nosebleeds* Please tell me you are going to update this soon because guhhhhhhhhhhh it is so good and complicated and freakin' delicious!

A few more updates since I last reviewed, I see. I'm really liking where things are going; Light seems pretty ominous as he evidently has some sort of plan in the works, and he's definitely got a bit of Kira filtering back into him which I hope will continue to evolve, and L's suspicions are rising a bit as well. I really like the constant references to Light's duality; I liked that concept a lot in the manga as well, and it's nice to see it presented so clearly in this story. Can't wait for more!

MMM, I quite like this story. I do like the little twist you've taken with this story.

more please!

started reading this again and man I love it!

melloxL? Favorite pairing next to nearxL! XD Ah man so much tension...hope L doesn't die at the end...but man it looks like some major shit is going to happen though >_>

still wonderfull; I wonder what is going to happen later on? Will Kira come out again? or something else?

Oh my god i loved it! i was moved! realy i was! When Light had no idea he was kira! god....ohh i can;t wait for the update!

YAY! AN UPDATE! GREAT STORY ^^