rate_review Reviews

i do hope you write more about this story (a sequel)i like it alot

At first I thought: No, that's not exactly what I wanted to read, too much Semei ... I mean I like him ... kind of but not with Soubi.
However it turned out to be really good and even without all the name-stuff and fighting and all that what actually makes the serial "Loveless" it was really good and smooth to read.
I would not mind to read more of your stories.

angsty yet sweet. I liked it but it would be wonderful if you posted an epilogue or something about them doing the deed so to speak lol.
anyway continue writing, you're good at it.

Great fic, are you going to do a sequal?

I wonder how this budding relationship is going to fare once the older brother returns... Will Soubi choose the little neko? By any chance, can I be added to the mailing list for this fic please? I think I saw somewhere that you had one going on. If so here is my email: marqqui @ yahoo . com, without the spaces of course! Thakns and hope to hear soon from you!

I dunno.. the ending kind of.. disappointed me.
I was hoping for something much more... dramatic I guess.
But, it's your story and if you feel it should have ended then that was up to you.

I AM GLAD YOU FINISHED-I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!MAYBE WHEN RIT.(CAN'T SPELL)FINDS OUT SEMIE IS GONE & IF POOR SOUBI WILL EVER HER R SAY HE LOVES HIM!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I can't believe I never reviewed this before! I love this story so much, from the beginning, and now that it's come to an end, I can honestly say it's my favorite completed Loveless fic! Possibly even all-time fav. I love your style of writing. It felt really natural for loveless, like it fit really well with soubi's pov and the characters and their relationships. The progression/decline/progression of soubi's relationships with the brothers was written really well, provoking thought and emotion that made me feel connected to soubi's plight and conflictions. The pace of his growing relationship with ritsuka and its evolution was handled really well, and I'm actually pleasantly surprised and happy that this ended with ritsuka keeping his ears (for now). You can have a perfect climax to a great story without "going all the way"!

All in all, this was a really sweet, slightly angst-flavored story. Great job! I hope to see more from you. ^_^

~ lg

I have only one thing to say and it is a threat. You better be making another series to follow up on this one or I will be forced to find you and destroy you. ^_^ Update soon.

Love angel.

LOVE YOUR STORY!ESP. HOW YOU DO ALL 3 OF THE MAIN CHARS.POOR SOUBI-HE WILL ALWAYS NEED A MASTER!CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE(I CLICK ON EVERY NITE FOR YOU UP WITH SOME OTHERS OF COURSE!)LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE PLEASE AT PROMO6686@AOL.COM THANKS AGAIN