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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazingly erotic story..well done.
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh... very hot... the writing is excellent grammatically and that is very refreshing; you can actually read what the author means, including the effects created by the manipulation of language, rather than imagining what they might mean. Good chapter! ^^ (merry xmas)
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the way you write this story. You bring out characters so well. :3 Could you email me when you do updates? I'd really appreciate it! Good luck on your writing and stuff and keep up the good work!
~Hyuu
~Hyuu
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Woo, that was hot.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY another chapter, oh so happy, and a steamy one too! Can not wait for your next chapter ^__^ So alone time mwhahahaha
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. Dying to see where the story goes. <3
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i just read all 11 chapters, and i have to say, your style of writing is very poetic and emotional. I love it! It is enchanting and communicates a lot to the reader. Thank you for remaining commited to this story and keeping up the very high standard of emotional development and relationship dynamics that are so complicated, insightful and believable. Good luck with the next chapter!
PS could you please email me with any updates? -----> mypheonixfire@hotmail.com THANKS
PS could you please email me with any updates? -----> mypheonixfire@hotmail.com THANKS
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I super love love this story! Please continue, I will be there to read when you do ^^
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahah nothing like walking into a room with your sibling having sex, or something along the lines to to ruin a day lol
Wow, nothing like some bondage ^__~
And please do not disregard this fic, it is highly enjoyable ^__^
Wow, nothing like some bondage ^__~
And please do not disregard this fic, it is highly enjoyable ^__^
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, you do not remember who your brother was getting in on with ... tisk tisk ... haha i kid
Oh, can not wait for more ^__^
Oh, can not wait for more ^__^