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It's so hard to find a good Loveless story...and yours has got to be the best so far...i usually don't stray from my naruto fics but when i do i like to come over to the other anime verses...This is a really great story and i hope you update soon so yeah keep up the good work and if you do you'll develope fangurls with no problem XD

Wow! This is my last day of summer vacation, and I'm please to have found such a good story to read today! I'm looking forward to your next chapter and just Soubi and Ritsuka! The opening chapter with the frotting scene was excellent--hot, intriguing, and a really bang of an opening. The pool party, and Semei's choice of that day to lose his ears was clever. The losing the ear sex and all the hints of abuse was good, but for some reason I thought Sem. would be more cruel. The going away sex was good too, but the conversation and the command to love Ritsuka was even better. I liked the picking up and airport chapter--nice touch to show them growing closer. Your take on Soubi's inner mind is fascinating, but a little sad. But it's also kind of realistic in that I've read that rape victims sometimes seek out relationships that recreate the rape. I'm hoping that when it comes to sex with Ritsuka, that Soubi enjoys a healthy type of sexual submission and masochism!
Thanks for a wonderful 8 chapters!
I hope to read more soon!

I'm a new reader here... but all I can say is,
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love it!!!
Actually... I don't read the parts with Soubi and Seimei doing things, coz' I'm too opposed to their pairing. Ah well, Ritsuka's too damned CUTE! Please, please UPDATE! Your story is adictive...
-Cherry

I do hope you update soon. I really enjoy your writing. It's very refreshing and well done.

Wow, I really love your characterizations of all three of them. They're so distinct. I also think it's funny that you had Soubi's family come from Osaka. You *do* realize that people from Osaka are known for being loud, confrontational and that most Japanese people don't like their accent/style of speaking, don't you? XD Granted I know this is a stereotype and there are many lovely people in Osaka ;)

Loving the story. Looking forward to more. :)

What A Such Sad Ending For Chapter Seven. I Loved The Begining, As Many Other Will ^.^. But A Sad Soubi Makes My Heart Sad. But I Do Hope That Ritsuka Makes Soubi Feel Better. Grrrr....I Truly Hate Semei. *Grabs Two Sporks* I'm Gonna Go Semei Hunting.

This chapter was very good, though, I do agree that the transition was a little rough. But it honestly worked for this particular chapter, being that it was the turning point for the story so far. Besides the rough transition, the chapter was very good. The emotions protrayed by the characters were very well done for their personalities. Though, I was a little depressed for Soubi, he just got so crushed by Seimei. But Ritsuka will make him all better in the end.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. =3

-Ran

Hey! What do you mean by "things changed drastically"?
I wanna know i wanna know i wanna know! That's an evil cliffhanger! I can't wait! Pleeeaaasssse update soon! I enjoy you story sooo much! It's one of my most favourite loveless stories! I havent't read many stories about Ritsukia no losing his memory and to be honest I never really likes them. But yours is soooo beautifully written and exciting!
Luv ya

WOAHZA!

That was not only meaningful. but truly rather HOT!

Other then. aowsome work. and poor Ritsuki. (=D) I have nothing really to say yet. maybe latter in the story..

*“Are you and my brother…”

Soubi could have sworn his heart stopped for a split second.*

MY HEART STOPPED FOR THAT SPLIT SECOND!! That was...brilliant. Finally a good loveless fic ^o^ pupypryde@yahoo.com please, and hope you update soon!