rate_review Reviews

The writing is more confident now and very enjoyable to read, keep it up. I've read so many fanfics (sad, ey?) and I can give you a great review, because I actually compare and contrast. I'm not kidding when I say this is really good and what I mean by that is that if someone says "Loveless" the first that would come to my mind is this story. I'm actually going to link this story on my ff.net profile as my favorite Loveless story, and recommend it to ff.net friends and what not. Please don't drop this, it will go down in Loveless history. I have been already inspired by this story I'm sure many others will be, that's how more stories get into a fandom. One writer comes along and posts a mind-boggling story and so many readers will be compelled to write one of their own. Maybe you should even put this up on fanfiction.net? I think you should if you haven't (just take out the sex scenes unfortunately, not allowed to put up lemons).

Now for the praising of the actual written chapter. It was even better than the last, every word I read, and I never stopped to take a break. When I got your update alert it felt like Christmas >< and I really can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to have DREAMS ABOUT THIS omg :S If you have any doubts about anything (characterization, plot, writing skill, dialogue) don't you dare doubt, this is perfect. I just recommend some physical action (such as a fight or something, or the rollercoaster in the amusement park flew off the track and whoever on it was injured,). Maybe you should "scare" Soubi and Ritsuka together. That might work, but it's your story and I trust you to continue writing this awesome work. Please update! <3

WTF YOUMUST UPDATE OR I'LL EXPLODE. This seriously myfavorite loveless story, I love how you made Ritsuka and Soubi see each other!~! Update update! kwikimi@yahoo.com I wish to get zhee alert pl0x it's good! I liked the lemons too I just wish you know...soubi and ritsuka had one <3_____<3 oh yes! plus you're a very talented writer and go about things very very well !!

First, I have to say that I'm so happy to see updates! :3 I really like this story, especially the fact that you took the time to be different with it. There's been too many repeat ideals, so it's nice to see a change. And it's great to read something where the characters are actually very much themselves. XD You've made me love Kio, I normally can't stand him but how you depict him is just perfect.

Keep up the great work. I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter! :3

PUT ME ON YOUR MAILING LIST PLEASE! This is really *really* good! I never could have imagined you incorporating Ritsuka so masterfully into the chapter, seriously! I was like, omg first four chapters was too much SeimeiSoubi I highly doubt that the SoubiRitsuka will be any good. I was dead wrong. This is fantastic and clearly one of the best loveless ficlets, however, in my opinion "A Twisted Triangle" would be far more entertaining with the spell battles. Hopefully you'll add some action scenes and Ritsuka getting hurt. I love those scenes (hehe). You have such wonderful writing skills and it's perfect for the story.

I just love, I really love, how you made Soubi think of Ritsuka. Their first real conversation, it touched me. It was like the cutest thing and something that would happen in real life if this were to be actually real. So yes this is totally in character. There was something else I wanted to mention about their first meeting, other than chapter six being my favorite chapter (so far), maybe I'll come to remember. Personally, I don't think I'll find any other fics as good as this, so please update soon. I'd really appreciate being on your mailing list, I can't wait for chapter seven!

I'm a newbie I fergot to put my e-mail (unless I did but can't really remember if I did or not)
e-mail both: bobkit24 @ aol.com or peppigal @ hotmail.com (without the spaces]

You have an amazingly beautifull story going here. You should post it on some other fan fiction based sights in adition to this one. Theres no way it's getting enough attention to do it justice.

I really like your writing. I love the way you capture the characters and the details you put into it. *sigh* Can't wait to read more.

Yay! You put a Dir en grey song in there! You rock! By the way, the story's great also! Good job!

very nice look into Soubi's inner mind...XD very well done!

I await more egerly

kiki

I like it, alot. It's well planned and it seems to actually have a plot which is different and quite refreshing. i enjoyed it alot. Very few if any mistakes show that you spent time on it, not just throwing out a bunch of nonsense.

I'm eager to read the next chapter.