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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH CLIFF HANGER!!! I HATE THOSE!!!
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the ending didn't suck. It was sort of a cliff hanger, so that's good. You always want to end chapters on a cliff hanger. You better write really really fast so I can find out what happens, or I can just force it out of you. Mwahahahaha.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KICK SOME NATSUMI ASS!!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha that little bitch is going to get what's coming to her. Freakin' right.
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT FOR SEX!!!!!!!!!!
And pants.
And pants.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I finally read it. I'm glad things are beginning to look up for Hana. I hope Natsumi gets her ass kicked too. That would be nice.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Hana, and Ryo was funny at the end. He's in bed with the girl he likes and he's like EEEEEEEEEEE lol. Nice chapter. Things are progressing nicely mwahahaha.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cye was like, a total prick in this chapter. He was DISAPPOINTED in Hana? I mean, WTF. Stupid Cye. I would have totally beat the spit out of Natsumi. Stupid Ryo getting in the way... *kicks a bucket*
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"It's a party in your mouth." That sounds like a slogan for something, like, "Taste the Rainbow" or something. Good chapter. It was a good way to get suspense built up for the coming events. :) BURN THE WITCH!
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is really sad what happened to Hana. Cye is being a prick, but I know it's not his fault. It's that damn Natsumi. I'll beat her down with a loaf of French bread. Take THAT.