rate_review Reviews

This is so wonderful! I love your fidelity to the characters and the series. You accurately portray all of Yohji; so often he is shown only with his better features, thus minimizing the depth and complexity of the character. Similarly you accurately show the warmer, caring side of Aya, when often that is neglected. You manage all this in the midst of an exciting plot with dangerous hints from both the mysterious woman and the assassin. I feel sorry only for Chloe, whom it appears will not be getting back on Aya ready to commit to him. Evil cliffie, so many possibilities for who is coming through that door -- not to mention for the persons who were so close to coming.

Ack! You can't stop there! Oh man, how disappointing that they were just about to consummate and then comes the knock at the door. LOL I bet Aya's ready to kill whoever it is, whether friend or foe.

Another great chapter! I really want to know who the woman is that's after Yoji. What's her motive and what would killing him accomplish? I look forward to the conversation between Y & A. They have a lot to settle.

Awww this is so sweet and sad... I can't wait to read more. I love how Asuka wanted to deserve because Yohji kept on calling for Aya in his sleep. That's a very good find.
It's so sad that Omi has gone all Mamoru!

Yay, an update! This chapter was just as good as the first. I was wondering what happened to Yoji at the end of the first chapter and now he's being hunted. Yoji's hospital situation and Aya & Omi's convo built some really good tension. I look forward to chapter three!

This is great so far, I like it! Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter :)

i cannot WAIT for the rest of this!!
VERY pausible. AND i'm on the edge of my seat the whole time putting the pieces together & willing events to happen. ^_^

PLEASE update soon!

This demands a quick update. The pace isn't too fast or too slow. The story is realistically told and it seems to be heading into a YojixAya direction though they are miles apart. The first chapter has peaked my interest and I really want to see where this is headed. This is really good.

Oh, I like the way your mind works! Yohji and Aya getting back together is my favourite kind of story. I can't read your mind but that seems to be where you are heading with this. I like your fast pace and positive results right up front in the first chapter. I do hope things work out for them as your story develops. I'd like to read more of this story. Please continue.