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I really like your story i just wish there were more chaps...

Omg that was fucking awesome I loved it. Good job.

This is a good fic, not what I normally read [I don't like the pairing] but a good fic none the less and so I just wanted to say you might get a much better response if you stuck it in the Naruto section where a lot more readers will be able to appriciate the fic. Naruto does have its own section as can be seen under the drop down list under 'anime/games story archive' up at the top and as long as your in that section when you post your story you have the option of putting your story under the naruto section. I think that this is a good fic and that you deserve a larger audiance for it so hopefully my advice will be helpful. Feel free to email me if you need help with that.

- Incessant_Darkness

ah, you updated. its a beautiful thing. i can't tell you how excited i was when i got a little email from fanfiction. le sigh. can't wait for the next chapter.

holy shit that was so good. i read it while i listened to NIN and the timing was perfect. so great. im relaly glad this is the beginning of a longer story because i dont want it to be just a one-shot. nooooooo. love your writing.

This was absolutely gorgeous and delicious and probably one of the sexiest things I've read in quite a while!!
So many stories are about these guys getting together or falling apart, it's nice to see a story where they are in a good relationship and still in love with each other, you've definitely started this off with a bang!!
I've been waiting for you to post this here ever since you said you would so I could leave a review, it's a good thing I checked under your name though because I was waiting for it to show up in the Naruto section, if you ever figure out how to post it there I'm sure you would get buckets of reviews! As always your story is awsome and makes me want to go back and read it again and again, I look forward to seeing what the actual story is about I'm sure it'll be as good as everything else you've written :)

Friggin hot!!! You do know how to burn an image into someone's brain! I'll never look at gentle (I thought) Iruka the same way again. Kakashi, I had always felt, was a horn dog, but he's met his match in your version of our beloved Dolphin. You have a great start to a story here--strong characterizations and fast action. I'm going back now to read the two introductory stories before I come back to this. I may have just discovered my new favourite writer! Keep on with this project--I'm very much looking forward to reading more of your work. Go you!