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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! >.<
cliffhanger! but i need to know who walked in on them!!!
it's kinda hard to understand some of what's happening with only dialogue - gotta figure out who's speaking, where they are, what's going on, etc - but kudos for using the form! ^__^
If Hemmingway can do it, so can we, yes?
update soon!
cliffhanger! but i need to know who walked in on them!!!
it's kinda hard to understand some of what's happening with only dialogue - gotta figure out who's speaking, where they are, what's going on, etc - but kudos for using the form! ^__^
If Hemmingway can do it, so can we, yes?
update soon!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Les Miserables? Wow, it's huge.”
Give him a pike, he will produce the 10th of August; give him a gun, you will have Austerlitz. He is Napoleon's stay and Danton's resource. Is it a question of country, he enlists; is it a question of liberty, he tears up the pavements.
“Hey, that's a movie, isn't it? I'll go rent it if you'll make popcorn.”
Beware! his hair filled with wrath, is epic; his blouse drapes itself like the folds of a chlamys. Take care! he will make of the first Rue Grenetat which comes to hand Caudine Forks. When the hour strikes, this man--
“You'd know how it ends tonight, instead of three weeks from now.”
“Kudou,” Aya lowered the book, “I know how it ends. I have read it before. I have also watched the movie, which completely destroyed everything of value within the book. It is, however, perfectly on a par with your intellect. Enjoy.”
“Ayy-ann...”
WAAAAAH! BEST BOOK EVER. And so, so true about the movie. DX
Give him a pike, he will produce the 10th of August; give him a gun, you will have Austerlitz. He is Napoleon's stay and Danton's resource. Is it a question of country, he enlists; is it a question of liberty, he tears up the pavements.
“Hey, that's a movie, isn't it? I'll go rent it if you'll make popcorn.”
Beware! his hair filled with wrath, is epic; his blouse drapes itself like the folds of a chlamys. Take care! he will make of the first Rue Grenetat which comes to hand Caudine Forks. When the hour strikes, this man--
“You'd know how it ends tonight, instead of three weeks from now.”
“Kudou,” Aya lowered the book, “I know how it ends. I have read it before. I have also watched the movie, which completely destroyed everything of value within the book. It is, however, perfectly on a par with your intellect. Enjoy.”
“Ayy-ann...”
WAAAAAH! BEST BOOK EVER. And so, so true about the movie. DX
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been reading any fanifc at all lately, so I'm embarrassed to say I hadn't read this yet. It was actually passed on to me as a reccomendation by my girlfriend, and I didn't notice it was your fic until after I started reading. I really liked the disjointed style you wrote this in. And you somehow managed to get me to read all the lyrics, despite my tendency to skim over them when I read songfics.
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
Oh my G- S- Anyone! I forgot how amazing you are, KD. Don't ask me to pick favorites in this songfic series, because... I cried, honestly. Just wonderful, and the Song lyrics in between, fitted just perfect, and... *flails*
Five stars. definitely.
Oh my G- S- Anyone! I forgot how amazing you are, KD. Don't ask me to pick favorites in this songfic series, because... I cried, honestly. Just wonderful, and the Song lyrics in between, fitted just perfect, and... *flails*
Five stars. definitely.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Just caught up with this fic. Lovely work KD, I really like the last chapter.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's... Beautiful. Very powerful (and frustrating because I couldn't read fast anough to keep up with the songs ;)) but very well done. The lirics say a lot of the things the boys won't let themselves say
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this! As always you did a wonderful job combining angst, romance, and a little comedy together. Bravo. What are you going to write next?
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so very good
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! If this is the end of this story I'll strangle you. This is sooooooo good. Write more quickly.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, KD. Nice work. I love the angst in this chapter. The ending was very powerful too. I love how Aya-chan knew just to start talking.