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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent stuff... I can feel Aya's pain and confusion. You have chosen wonderful, if not eclectic songs that fit every chapter. Great job and I can't wait to read more.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I just love this. Wonderful. I was giggling at the last line too.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect integration there, very smooth. Love Yohji on drugs though, quite cute.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wai, KD, I'm just entranced by this. I love what you don't say as much as what you say. You have me on the edge, waiting for a conclusion, resolution, something!
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very pretty imagery. Sad, but lovely writing.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done, KD!! I feel like I've just been drug from the magazine stand to the library. I thought I knew what this was about until I got to the end. Then I realised my attention had been on the belly button, when it should have been on the pain in Aya's eyes. Bravo!!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's sad, very prettily written though. Good job, and I always loved that song.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sad, but completely perfect.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how much I love your writing lately?