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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don’t know how I missed this one and apologize for not reviewing sooner.
Your writing is well done but I have a big problem with the subject of your idea.
The simple fact is, that, Shinji raped Asuka. I know that there are a lot of stories out there like this but it doesn’t make it right. They only perpetuate the myth that, ‘she says no but she means yes’. Women are human beings and deserve respect. You can write some really good smut and still give women the dignity that they deserve; it just takes a little more effort.
Please don’t take this as a flame. The ‘big brother’ in me kicks in when I see stuff like this. I was raised to be a man and treat women with respect. My reward has been an unfair share of willing nookie.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Dale (AKA 94saturn)
Your writing is well done but I have a big problem with the subject of your idea.
The simple fact is, that, Shinji raped Asuka. I know that there are a lot of stories out there like this but it doesn’t make it right. They only perpetuate the myth that, ‘she says no but she means yes’. Women are human beings and deserve respect. You can write some really good smut and still give women the dignity that they deserve; it just takes a little more effort.
Please don’t take this as a flame. The ‘big brother’ in me kicks in when I see stuff like this. I was raised to be a man and treat women with respect. My reward has been an unfair share of willing nookie.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Dale (AKA 94saturn)
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. ^_^ I was kinda thinking about writing a fic like this, but at least somebody did a great job of beating me to it! ;) Kick ass job, this was hot (What can I say, I LOVE A/S; they're so perfect together!). btw, apparently there is some (very) subtle subtext that before & when Asuka goes into Misato's room to sleep, she's more or less either asking Shinji to have sex with her or at the very least be with her.
It's discussed here if you're interested: http://evamonkey.com/board/viewtopic.php?t=2706
Take care, Sailorstardust
It's discussed here if you're interested: http://evamonkey.com/board/viewtopic.php?t=2706
Take care, Sailorstardust
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work. I liked it. are you going to do shinji/ritsuko too? after all shinji is probably 100 times better than his old man. you know what i mean.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad Hopefully we get to see a Shinji and Misato lemon fic soon