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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...interesting, actually.
Although Fuu is a bit OOC with some of the swearing that you put into her sentences, you actually manage to keep her in-character very well. I think the swearing does at emphasis on those secret thoughts.
Although Fuu is a bit OOC with some of the swearing that you put into her sentences, you actually manage to keep her in-character very well. I think the swearing does at emphasis on those secret thoughts.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot, I really liked it! The concept was nice and your portrayal of Fuu and Mugen were also great, good job!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was so well written! I think you captured the both of them perfectly :) Thank you for this!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STUFF, GOOD STUFF! I SERIOUSLY HOPE YOU'LL CONTINUE, CUZ SO FAR THIS IS AWESOME! VERY TRUE TO THE CHARACTERS, AND HOPEFULLY THERE WILL BE SOME FUTURE HOTNESS. :-D
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I LOVE it! And what are you talking about?? I thought their characterization was great! :-D Very in-character, entertaining, and several good points that you brought up within Fuu's subconscious. I hope there'll be lots more, because this is fantastic! Update please!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you HAVE to continue! :) I loved it! Very unique, funny, and ... well ... dang it, it was just plain good! I hope you'll continue ASAP! You've made me babble, and I haven't babbled over a Fuugen fic in a loooong time! ;0D