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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I just finished reading five completed books of Eternal Hearts and was a bit disapointed that the 6th book has net been completed. I do not know what caused you to stop writing for it but that does sadden me as I was looking forward to the continuation of your series. It is so rare to read good Alucard and Seras Fanfiction and I have enjoyed reading all of your work. I will admit that I did think Alucard was a tad out of character in how quickly he opened up to Seras but still it was great to read. I felt you had a good mixture of action, romance, and humor as well as character growth and developement overall. I liked how the romance and relationship between Alucard and Seras and how it allowed for a more personal guidance and a more easy acceptance of her vampire nature as she had some time to adjust. One little nitpicky thing that got to me a bit was the fact that you had Alucard unable to be awake or mobile during the day. After all it's Canon in both Hellsing and Bram Stokers Dracula that Dracula can walk about in the daylight without facing death. I think it takes more energy, and they aren't as strong during the day as well as bright light will make it more obvious that they are not human. Seras, as long as she refused to drink blood was unable to go out in the daylight, and I can't say anything in regards to the FREAKS, but true vampires can go about in the day if needed. Somewhere over time, reluctance for the sun turned into death by the sun that is so popular in modern depictions of vampires
I will admit that a small part of me was surprised that once Seras was no longer Alucard's servant vampire Integra didn't worry that she would be a threat to Hellsing. I believe it would have been out of character for Seras to try and leave yet with all Hellsing did to first kill then enslave Alucard, to let one of his offspring around with free will seems a bit against what they would allow, at least without Seras making some kind of oath to bind her to some kind of code of ethics.
I also did wonder that with Seras coming from MI-5 and usually MI-5 coming to the scenes first then noticing hellsing, why Seras wasn't used as a Liason when she was available at night to view the crime scenes. Especially if she had friends or was known in the department. Unless it was determined that she needed to sever all ties with her human life, especially since members of MI-5 will probably be rather observant and notice any changes to her after turning.
I will say I was a little disapointed with the 5th book because there was no resolution in regards to the other scientist who ran off with a copy of that fertility formula. There was nobody who seemed interested in a vampire pregnancy that wanted to get at Seras. Seras's and Alucard's daughter having a heartbeat wasn't explained. We also don't know what happened to the rest of the tainted meat or any possible side effects it would have on humans. You never answered fully if that means Seras and Alucard can have more children or if they would need a fresh infusion of the fertility drug. There is also the question of would she be bound by the Hellsing family when of age. While I do truly believe that Alucard and Integra respect each other, I doubt he'd stay long term if not bound to Hellsing. Considering his hate of FREAKS, and his love of conflict, I am sure he would stay for a while but with a growing family to protect, I sometimes doubt he would stay if not bound given that situation. I would have loved to see the addressing if not the resolution of some of these issues and the fact that I wish to see more of your work means that I really liked it. SO I hope you don't take my comments negatively. I have nothing but respect for you and your work and I hope someday you find the desire and inspiration to continue writing.
I just finished reading five completed books of Eternal Hearts and was a bit disapointed that the 6th book has net been completed. I do not know what caused you to stop writing for it but that does sadden me as I was looking forward to the continuation of your series. It is so rare to read good Alucard and Seras Fanfiction and I have enjoyed reading all of your work. I will admit that I did think Alucard was a tad out of character in how quickly he opened up to Seras but still it was great to read. I felt you had a good mixture of action, romance, and humor as well as character growth and developement overall. I liked how the romance and relationship between Alucard and Seras and how it allowed for a more personal guidance and a more easy acceptance of her vampire nature as she had some time to adjust. One little nitpicky thing that got to me a bit was the fact that you had Alucard unable to be awake or mobile during the day. After all it's Canon in both Hellsing and Bram Stokers Dracula that Dracula can walk about in the daylight without facing death. I think it takes more energy, and they aren't as strong during the day as well as bright light will make it more obvious that they are not human. Seras, as long as she refused to drink blood was unable to go out in the daylight, and I can't say anything in regards to the FREAKS, but true vampires can go about in the day if needed. Somewhere over time, reluctance for the sun turned into death by the sun that is so popular in modern depictions of vampires
I will admit that a small part of me was surprised that once Seras was no longer Alucard's servant vampire Integra didn't worry that she would be a threat to Hellsing. I believe it would have been out of character for Seras to try and leave yet with all Hellsing did to first kill then enslave Alucard, to let one of his offspring around with free will seems a bit against what they would allow, at least without Seras making some kind of oath to bind her to some kind of code of ethics.
I also did wonder that with Seras coming from MI-5 and usually MI-5 coming to the scenes first then noticing hellsing, why Seras wasn't used as a Liason when she was available at night to view the crime scenes. Especially if she had friends or was known in the department. Unless it was determined that she needed to sever all ties with her human life, especially since members of MI-5 will probably be rather observant and notice any changes to her after turning.
I will say I was a little disapointed with the 5th book because there was no resolution in regards to the other scientist who ran off with a copy of that fertility formula. There was nobody who seemed interested in a vampire pregnancy that wanted to get at Seras. Seras's and Alucard's daughter having a heartbeat wasn't explained. We also don't know what happened to the rest of the tainted meat or any possible side effects it would have on humans. You never answered fully if that means Seras and Alucard can have more children or if they would need a fresh infusion of the fertility drug. There is also the question of would she be bound by the Hellsing family when of age. While I do truly believe that Alucard and Integra respect each other, I doubt he'd stay long term if not bound to Hellsing. Considering his hate of FREAKS, and his love of conflict, I am sure he would stay for a while but with a growing family to protect, I sometimes doubt he would stay if not bound given that situation. I would have loved to see the addressing if not the resolution of some of these issues and the fact that I wish to see more of your work means that I really liked it. SO I hope you don't take my comments negatively. I have nothing but respect for you and your work and I hope someday you find the desire and inspiration to continue writing.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed this book very much. Although I wonder since Morgan predicted that their child would not age at what point will she stop growing? I'm curious to read the conclusion in Book Six. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful ending to this book! the wedding was absolutely lovely. you describe so well i could see the beauty. the vows were wonderful, as well. and the wedding night, well of course that was excellent. you have quite the knack for writing plot and porn quite well, indeed! and the end was so sweet. i love this series so much. again, your writing is so wonderful and you make all of the characters so engaging and believable. i'm excited for the next book, and i'm glad you're going to continue with more! excellent story and writing, once again!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. your a great writer. this series I can truthfuly say is the best hellsing fan fic I have EVER read. I stoped reading hellsing fics becaus there were no reall good ones with length but I had to read it all after I read your first part of the eternal hearts series. and they were all great. I was so happy when you did the last one with seras and integara getting pregnant ( alucards going to make such a good daddy ^^). Hope to read more soon. you have to keep this going .
Ja ne!
Ja ne!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep see if you have updated yet. i so love this series. and the way you write Alucard and Seras is amazing. hope mine comes out half as good. Just put up chapter 3 to bullet of hell shield of heaven.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. it was sweet to see the new parents interacting with their new babies. i do like these chapters that show human sides to both alucard and integra, though i wish integra would soften up just a little bit. but i really don't think she would, so i think you're writing her character very well. i'm excited to see how things keep going!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
short yet cute hope you give another chappie soon I loved it. Update soon
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
quite the exciting chapter. two births at once was probably hard to write, but you did a great job. i'm glad both babies are fine, but integra's gave a little scare. i really liked kenneth in this chapter. he got all the best lines! and i love him being called 'mr. hellsing'. i hope that the birth didn't take too much out of seras, though i can't imagine her back on duty anytime soon. the names chosen where nice, too. so it will be interesting to see how these two couples will react to being parents now.
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phew it's over man that's why I having a c-section before I start dilating whenever I have kids. Well that was hellva cute can't wait for more Mariah very nice name and Henry just too cute. See you soon hopefully
Loves Arry
Loves Arry
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue