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schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. i definitely liked the sublte scenes of this chapter. the parts with alucard and seras were quite sweet, and it's nice to see alucard not so...homicidal, but still in a believable way. i like how you kind of juxtapose that with the relationship between integra and kenneth. it's upsetting that they don't have such an intimate relationship as alucard and seras do, but it's also nice to see that you haven't made this series into a love fest where everything works out perfectly for every character. and speaking of characters, i like zoey more and more, and i like how her drawings continue to come into play. and her relationship with pickman is coming along nicely, too. well, i can't wait for the babies to come. will seras happen to go into labor at the same time? i guess i'll just have to wait and see.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meanie leaving it like that well can't for your next update baby boy integra comes into the world what will happen next? I await eagerly

Loves Arry
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY! That chappie was amazing. Fight scene and ALUCARD MASTURBATING my dream has come true that was sooo freaking hot great job Silverrose cos... ohh yea wow and yummy hehehe Update when you can I'll be waiting... man was that hot!

Loves Arry
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the action in this chapter was nicely done. it's always good to see alucard doing one of the many things he does best: killing ghouls and FREAKS. i also liked how you had him go up against twins. their characterization was well done, even though they were only around for a short time. as for alucard's time with himself, that was a nice little treat as well. it's always interesting to see if he would give in to such actions. but vampires are sensual creatures, aren't they? very good job yet again. and i sense a couple of babies in the next chapter or two!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was starting to miss this fic! another wonderful chapter. i really liked the collage that zoey and seras made. it sounds like a nice present, indeed. and i must say that i love the thought of alucard playing the violin. i really love the sound of a well played string instrument. it was a very nice touch indeed. well, great job again!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too cute I hope you have a scene of him playing with his trusty hand now thats a beautiful thought. update soon please! I loved it

Loves Arry
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read every single Eternal Hearts Series over the last three days. Needless to say, I am completely impressed. I found myself laughing, tearing up, and getting very happy (if you know what I mean). I absolutely love all of these stories and I hope you continue them. I just wish Kouta Hirano would add something like this to all the OVA's and manga (or even make an adult version).

Anyway, if you ever need a Beta for any reason, contact me at kawaiicasey@yahoo.com . I found a few spelling errors here and there, and the occasional grammar mishap. Other than that, you are doing beautifully. I especially like the funny scenes where Alucard and Kenneth get drunk or when Walter walks in on Kenneth giving Integral a foot rub.

I really love all your pairings, and the new additions to the big family!

Keep updating so I don't die of anticipation!
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delicious hope you update soon sry I was late reviewing

Loves Arry
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet another good chapter. clothes shopping is always fun, but when will integra finally get to it? her foot massage was a great scene, though. sometimes walter should just keep on walking, eh? alucard at seras examination acted just as i imagined he would. he sure can be quite the jealous creature. and seras and alucard's little scene at the end was a nice way to end the chapter. good job again.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a fun chapter! silly men. i thought the interactions between integra/kenneth and seras/alucard where hilarious. it just takes something little to blow up into something big, doesn't it? and ending up with kenneth and alucard getting drunk was classic. i can only imagine the drunken conversations they had. but where are seras and zoey going? out for a fun girls night perhaps? i guess i'll have to wait and see. good job!

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