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for When Somebody Loves You

by ElectricOutcast

person Louk
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very tasteful and extremely well done; just as I'd have expected from a fan fiction based on this series, having seen the first 24 episodes thus far and preparing to watch the second series as soon as those DVDs start arriving. Though my one possible critique would be the hyphen used when Aoi addresses Kaoru; though I know that's how it's supposed to be, it always sounds as if she's calling him Kaorusama, as if that's his actual name. But like I said, great story and I wish it could be continued at least into the birth of their first child.

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