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Sorry, I'm not logged on or anything. It's just, I wanted to review this because it was so beautiful. By the end I was crying, still am a little. Thanks for writting this and keep writting.

I know I reviewed this once already, but I was re-reading it. I would still like it if you could do a chapter from K's POV, but I was also wondering if you had ever considered doing one from Ryuichi's POV because you mentioned him several times throughout the story, and I think that it would be interesting to see things from his view point. Just thought I'd throw out that idea! Thanks!

this fic almost made me cry, it was just so sad. i liked it very much, though. if you'll still add K's pov, please do so.. I hope that K & Hiro do get together...

You made me cry! Great work!

This is a fantastic story!
I have proceeded to cry in all four chapters and not much makes me do that! LOL

Arigato!

This is a really, really good fic. I do think that writing a chapter from K's point of view would be interesting as we don't often get to see what goes inside the gun-crazy American's head. Keep up the good work!

OSHHHHH.

I luff it. It's cute and heart-warming inna very morbid way. You should make more. Hell, I'll kick yer ass if you don't make more.

BITTER SWEET ENDING YO. And they should meet with eachother. They'll most likely be in Hell where all the hot sexy gay men are anyway. And thus, they can screw eachother's brains out. :3

I shall keep this short and simple.
Another chapter.
Thank you.

Changed my mind...
Definitely another chapter needed, especially Eiri's point of view, with his reaction at the end when he's listening to Shuichi, it is just begging to be told. Clearly he is worried about Shuichi and his disappearance and I, as a reader, feel that Yuki's recollection of the events from their break up and leading up to Shuichi's phone call needs to be established.
And perhaps, if you feel a muse (just an idea), you could look at a short chapter of another character's point of view from outside their relationship, for example Tohma, who would have witnessed Eiri's behaviour and of course Bad Luck. This kind of chapter would fit perfectly as a reflection during the wake after the funeral (that is if Shuichi has in fact died and isn't miraculously rescued somehow, teehee! Not that that's a bad thing HAH!), and seems a very Tohma thing to do! lol

Well, I'll look forward to the next chapter!
Luv ya work!
Skimbleshanks!

that was an incredible read!

(crying) Oh god that was so well written and depressing it made me hug my cat to my chest and cry