rate_review Reviews

i enjoy reading this, especially with all the details you put in. but it can be confusing. how about saying whose pov it is. and using more proper nouns instead of usually sticking to pronouns

your style of writing is impressive! i wanna read more! but once again, this story is confusing, that's probably why you aren't getting as many reviews and hits (and as high a rating) as you deserve. also, you promised all this-

Anal,Angst,AU/AR,Bond,D/s,Fet,H/C,Humil,M/M,Oral,S&M,UST,WIP,Yaoi
but we haven't really seen it. it's taking an awfully long time to get to the yukixshu i'm guessing? honestly, i would've stopped reading this if i didn't see yaoi in your summary.

but plz continue this story!

wow
at first i thought it'd be a cute maybe funny fic
but...wow
this is some hardcore shit man (the really good "shit" not the bda kind)
awsome
totally love it

more more that story and i can not wait for more of the story and see how shiuichi and yuki get to geter. up date soon.

more more that story is real good and i love it and can not wait for the next chapter of the story. up date soon the story is real good too. up date soon.

a good start for a new story and i can not wait for you to do more of the story and see were you go with the story. up date soon