rate_review Reviews

squee!!!!!
(i know I suck at reviews,so I leave you with enthusiasm instead)

Wonderful story, I loved the AU plot line.

I really enjoyed reading this and I wouldn't mind in the least if this became a multi-chaptered story *hint*. I haven't read many WK fics where the guys just live regular lives and it was a very nice change. As much as I like Aya-chan I didn't miss her presence here at all so that AU twist didn't bother me. Once again, I really liked this story and I hope you write more for it. I don't care if I'll have to wait for your Naruto fics to finish. This story would be worth the wait!

I definatly could see you going somewhere more with this slight AU. There are a lot of interesting choices you could make - Does Yohji introduce Aya to Manx? Is there a Kritiker? Is Yohji even an assain? And on and on. I owuld be interested in seeing where you might take this.

That felt a bit odd with the three not being Weiss, but you ended up with Yohji and Aya together, so there are no complaints on my part. Your story was well written and a bit sad, but I liked your characterizations of the four and the way you had them interact. Sometimes we just get overwhelmed with Aya's exotic beauty and forget that Yohji, though a different flavour, is quite a beauty, too. Thank you for reminding us of that. More in this same vein would be nice, but I love your Naruto stuff, so please finish up with that, too!