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for Eye of the Storm

by Ferai

person TicTac
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reminds me of a fic I read on the net a year ago. Nice job though, I like it.
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As a rule I don't really like Pokemon fics, but I like this one a lot! I read it 'cause Mew is so cute and my favorite critter next to Pikachu, and darn if it wasn't really good. Well done, you!

I especially like the voice you've givin Mew. Her frustration and annoyance at her situation is clear, but she's still the cute and perky little thing you might expect her to be. Good job!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D'aww, Mew and Trent make such a cute couple already! The depiction of him nibbling the carrot was just darling. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person RAW19
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
- sadly, reviews are usually hard to come by here. which is why i try my best to always review others stories.

this story continues to amaze me. i truly enjoy the pace of the fic, with a little bit of fan-service here and there without it turning into a PWP. along with things you don't usually see, like a weather-predicting moonstone. such things may seem small, but i find the originality the markings of a truly good author. i look forward to the next chapter!
person RAW19
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an excellent story. i really enjoyed the visuals and detail of everything. I also enjoyed the way you portrayed these two chracters. i look forward to the next chapter.

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