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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It does seem kinda PWP, but its tasteful in the lust department. I notice that you put Keitaro name in the body of the text. I think you just slipped and didn't notice you place that name in there. Great job but I am still reading the text and trying to find time to do so.
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry again but i also notice discontinuity. You stated that Shiki had his shirt off and having Hisui in her birthday suit. Where did the shirt come in for Shiki?
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To repeat what others have said, great fic!
Hmm...I think I'd like to see Len most. ^_^
Hmm...I think I'd like to see Len most. ^_^
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with JWM`s review... but I can't wait to see how Kohaku reacts to this situation. As for your fate/stay night idea just wait until you get more info or start with saber as the default any way lookin foward to your future updates
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice stuff in this one. The only discrepancy I thought was the fact that Kohaku ignored Shiki's obvious distress without attempting to soothe him. I can't really talk about Souka as I have no familiarity with her character. Ignoring that, I'm definitely impressed by you and your efforts.
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice chappie, as usual. ^^
BTW, is it alright to request for a Fate/Stay Night fanfic? I've noticed that nobody here seems to write about that anime, and its one of the best I've ever seen. And if I remember correctly, its also one of Type-Moon's games as well.
Anyway, hope you can grant my request, and thanks in advance. ^^
BTW, is it alright to request for a Fate/Stay Night fanfic? I've noticed that nobody here seems to write about that anime, and its one of the best I've ever seen. And if I remember correctly, its also one of Type-Moon's games as well.
Anyway, hope you can grant my request, and thanks in advance. ^^
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter; I don't mind the length! It's a nice touch and nice plays with Hanpei (or Handful)
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tsukihime smut? Count me in! I'm also hoping for lemons for Sion (normal or vampire version), Satsuki and White Len in the near future.
Will you be including the other main females as well? I wouldn't mind reading a good Ciel, Arc or Akiha lemon. Should be interesting to see how Akiha reacts when she sees her beloved brother screwing four other women (and more interesting when she complains about not getting enough loving from her nii-san).
Also, just to make an interesting plot development, how about Nanaya coming out to play sometime?
Will you be including the other main females as well? I wouldn't mind reading a good Ciel, Arc or Akiha lemon. Should be interesting to see how Akiha reacts when she sees her beloved brother screwing four other women (and more interesting when she complains about not getting enough loving from her nii-san).
Also, just to make an interesting plot development, how about Nanaya coming out to play sometime?
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very, very sweet chapter. The double blow action reminded me of a Tsukihime doujin I read. I don't suppose we'll see Ciel will we?
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! More, we want more. Also hope you do an AkihaxShiki pairing.XD