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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! That was great!! I've been wanting to read this forever since it is the only Sousuke and Kaname adult fic on AFFN that I haven't read. It was well worth the wait (and the sacrifice of some sleep)!
Wow, I just don't know where to begin or what to say. I loved everything. I loved how the persepctives switched through out the chapters and ran seemlessly together. I loved all the emotions and nervousness displayed between the two. I loved how they FINALLY consumate their relationship at the end.
Wow, that was some good sex too, without being crude or over the top. It was just right. It was truly a "love making" scene and not just sex without purpose.
Ok, I think that wraps it up now. I really hope you will write another story about them some time. This was just so enjoyable and they are so hard to find good fics about.
Thanks for writing such an awesome one!!!
Wow, I just don't know where to begin or what to say. I loved everything. I loved how the persepctives switched through out the chapters and ran seemlessly together. I loved all the emotions and nervousness displayed between the two. I loved how they FINALLY consumate their relationship at the end.
Wow, that was some good sex too, without being crude or over the top. It was just right. It was truly a "love making" scene and not just sex without purpose.
Ok, I think that wraps it up now. I really hope you will write another story about them some time. This was just so enjoyable and they are so hard to find good fics about.
Thanks for writing such an awesome one!!!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Charming, funny, and well-written. Thanks for sharing this!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have no fear: your whole story was excellent.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cheesiness?!? FOR GOD's SAKE THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.
That was simply incredible ...one of the best stories I've read in this site. Even though it was in a first person narrative story ( and trust me , I've had bad experiences with those ) you caught each character's spirit perfectly. What a masterpiece!
I'm printing this right now and I will let you know that only 2 other fics on this whole site were printed by my computer. I only do that to the fics I really love , the ones that I want to keep forever.
I congratulate you for this fic , and I apologise for not being able to tell you how much I like your fic. Unfortunately , my English is so far from perfect that it's shameful to me to read such a incrdibly well-written fanfiction. You have so much talent , I can't believe that I didn't find you sooner!I hope to see more of your works in the future and you can be sure that you got a brand new , loyal fan =)
That was simply incredible ...one of the best stories I've read in this site. Even though it was in a first person narrative story ( and trust me , I've had bad experiences with those ) you caught each character's spirit perfectly. What a masterpiece!
I'm printing this right now and I will let you know that only 2 other fics on this whole site were printed by my computer. I only do that to the fics I really love , the ones that I want to keep forever.
I congratulate you for this fic , and I apologise for not being able to tell you how much I like your fic. Unfortunately , my English is so far from perfect that it's shameful to me to read such a incrdibly well-written fanfiction. You have so much talent , I can't believe that I didn't find you sooner!I hope to see more of your works in the future and you can be sure that you got a brand new , loyal fan =)
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good!
The story is enjoyable; Sousuke-Kaname get-together and lemons will never be enough.
The idea of them needing a bootstrap adds likelyhood to the story, and Kaname and Sousuke are both in characters, expecially when he's still insecure of "how far" she's ready to go.
The writing is fluent and enjoyable even if english is an aquired language, since no things like "waddaya.." (whatever it is) are present.
The lemon scene is very good, equilibrated both in the description (not too "left unsaid", not details added just to make the story dirtier, and usually making it stupid) and in the events happened, they had the right time to 'digest' the idea of being together intimately.
The only small defect is that both wrote in they essaies some particular about Mithril that neither would have said to the Sensei; not a big deal, but...
This will cost you... a 98/100.
And that means you'll have to write another story to make sure you make up for this imperfection.
I'll be patiently waiting.
The story is enjoyable; Sousuke-Kaname get-together and lemons will never be enough.
The idea of them needing a bootstrap adds likelyhood to the story, and Kaname and Sousuke are both in characters, expecially when he's still insecure of "how far" she's ready to go.
The writing is fluent and enjoyable even if english is an aquired language, since no things like "waddaya.." (whatever it is) are present.
The lemon scene is very good, equilibrated both in the description (not too "left unsaid", not details added just to make the story dirtier, and usually making it stupid) and in the events happened, they had the right time to 'digest' the idea of being together intimately.
The only small defect is that both wrote in they essaies some particular about Mithril that neither would have said to the Sensei; not a big deal, but...
This will cost you... a 98/100.
And that means you'll have to write another story to make sure you make up for this imperfection.
I'll be patiently waiting.