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I would normally not review but had to this time...SCREAMS...you are such a TEASE!!!!!...but still love ya...catti

Lovely story, keep up the good work! If it comes down to 300 writers boycotting the site over a work of pure fiction, I'll still be here waiting for updates. :3

It's a joy to read something so well written. You have quite the talent for writing!

I vote for Tohma to open his eyes and apologize to Shuu because they don't deserve the pain they go through and because if he doesn't I'm gonna chop his head off. Anyway this story is great. I needed a couple of hours to read it. It's so interesting I couldn't stop myself. It's so thrilling and exciting. I LOVE IT!!!

hey sorry for your loss! but congrats on the twins. i love all your fics and can't wait for your next chapter.

That's really GREAT thing you are writing. No one has described Tohma that cool before. You know I'm really into Tohma/Shu,
there's no much stories about this awesome pairing.
Nee, update soon please, I'm dying to know what's gonna happen.

Please update ASAP! this is getting somewhere![anessavanella@aim.com]

I read 22 chapters in 1 sitting. Excellent story... Please, try and write more soon. And it's about time that Shuichi finds out just how everyone really feels about him, from one source or another.(don't you think?)

Nobody ever TALKS to each other! Nobody just freakin' ASKS the right questions. They all just assume things and create their own misery. Every damn problem in this story is based on lack of communication! GOD DAMN!!! Men are IDIOTS!! Poor Shuichi. Everyone claims to care about him so much but nobody wants to just tell him what's going on. His opinions are never properly respected. I felt my hand literally just 'iching' to slap someone so many time during this fic. You don't even KNOW!!!

On the up side, if you've got me this emotional about it you know that means that your writing is fan-freakin'-tastic. I must say, you are indeed doing a 'fabulous' job! ^.^ Look, look at me... I'm on the edge of my seat. (yeah, you think I'm jokin' but I'm not) So of course, if you don't update soon I might slip and fall on my ass. And we all know you don't want that on your conscience... Seriously though, this is angsty as all shit but I love it. I especially enjoy seeing Tohma's actual 'human' side being explored a little. I think he's a character that doesn't tend to be appreciated enough. I also love to see Shuichi being portrayed as something deeper than a simple hyperactive idiot, without making him too god-awfully pathetic.

Anyway, I'm really glad I decided to give this a look over. It's the best work I've read in a while. Especially in this fandom. I'll be on the look out for an update from you for sure. Keep up the awesome work!

Luv and Kisses!
dagget

Just wanted to let you know that this is one of the best Gravitation fics I've read =D Great characterizations and just the right amount of emotion in the story. Eager to know what happens! Hope you post more soon ^_^