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that's a very cool story...will you continue it?

By the way, loved D's crazy dancing! Poor Chris! i bet he was majorly confused! *snickering* Tetsu should have gotten it on tape! Either him or Ten-chan...They stuck me as the type to get major kicks out of that...That and they could tape D's dancing to show it to Leon later on...Papa D would have enjoyed it too as well. I remember him teasing D about Leon being headstrong, and detrimined. I think he was surprised that Vesca joined the F.B.I. and chased him for 20-22 yrs through...I couldn't really say, since the Ds are impossible to read. But D seemed sad instead of evil...Papa D said he blamed Sofu for D's current sadness and stress...I can understand the kamis wanting revenge. But they FORGOT that NOT every human on Earth are evil! The problem are the huimans that harm others on purpose-well they make us decent humans look bad...

Again, good twist. I like the blend of the Guardian mythology. This is most definitely AU and I like it.
Leon and Chris are guardians. Nice. D jumping around in joy like a two-year old... priceless. Tetsu should have had a camera. Blackmail material. ~_^

I thought I'd reviewed this. My mistake, anyway-I have so many questions. But one question I forgot to ask over at Fanfiction.net. Is this an AU? Because Papa D mentioned the virius didn't work. He used a virius in Volume 10 of the manga. I have the final volume in my bedroom. In it, Chris left, so did D, and Sofu later on. Papa D and Vesca died. Gomen nasai if I spoiled the ending for anyone. Vesca and Papa D showed up in this. Chris's still at the petshop. D's still there in LA. PLEASE explain the timeline clearly in the next chapter if possible...Otherwise, Loved this!

*amused* By the way, didn't Leon already use the son of bitch line in volume 10? Vesca also accused Papa D of cloning himself when he saw D. That was BEFORE Papa D exposed Q-chan to be Sofu!