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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the very few stories that has close to no grammatical errors. I am impressed!
The story line is interesting too...I am waiting for that lemon you promised :)
UST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) makes for good plot material.
Keep up the good work.
The story line is interesting too...I am waiting for that lemon you promised :)
UST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) makes for good plot material.
Keep up the good work.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a realy good read. You have romance without the lollypop koolaid kiddy fluff added that alot of people bring in. And the chapter five Robin ending was yummy.. as is the way you describe Amon...
Excuse me must go bug Hot dark haired blue eyed room mate.. for some yummy thoughts.. this is YOUR Fult!
Blessings,
Alexis Bromad
Excuse me must go bug Hot dark haired blue eyed room mate.. for some yummy thoughts.. this is YOUR Fult!
Blessings,
Alexis Bromad
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the nice reviews! I am working on another chapter, maybe two, hopefully it will be posted this weekend. I am really struggling with the writing of the lemon, I am trying to make it good and steamy but not too cliche, also while keeping everyone in character. It's slow going but I am making progress.
kee- Thanks a lot. I do try to keep my grammar, spelling, etc as correct possible, I hate when people write fics and completely ignore the rules of the English language (although I make an exception for people who are not native English speakers). And don't worry, the lemon is coming in a few chapters- although I love dragging things out a bit- it builds anticipation for the main event!
Alexis B- Thank you! I am happy you like the fic so far. I am trying to keep it as real and true to the characters as possible. I am not the cutesy, fluffy sweetness type either, although fluff is nice as long as it's well done and in small doses. There will be a fluffy-ish ending to this fic, but lemony too. Oh, and about bugging your hot room mate- I say, lucky you! At least you HAVE a hot room mate within easy reach! All I have is my overactive imagination.. lusting after cartoon men.. and Johnny Depp, mmmm.
Megan and Midnight- don't worry, there will be more chapters. I am about 80% finished writing this, but I will finish it, and I have a couple other ideas for later. But those are stalled right now, I am hoping that publishing this one will help me with my writer's block.
kee- Thanks a lot. I do try to keep my grammar, spelling, etc as correct possible, I hate when people write fics and completely ignore the rules of the English language (although I make an exception for people who are not native English speakers). And don't worry, the lemon is coming in a few chapters- although I love dragging things out a bit- it builds anticipation for the main event!
Alexis B- Thank you! I am happy you like the fic so far. I am trying to keep it as real and true to the characters as possible. I am not the cutesy, fluffy sweetness type either, although fluff is nice as long as it's well done and in small doses. There will be a fluffy-ish ending to this fic, but lemony too. Oh, and about bugging your hot room mate- I say, lucky you! At least you HAVE a hot room mate within easy reach! All I have is my overactive imagination.. lusting after cartoon men.. and Johnny Depp, mmmm.
Megan and Midnight- don't worry, there will be more chapters. I am about 80% finished writing this, but I will finish it, and I have a couple other ideas for later. But those are stalled right now, I am hoping that publishing this one will help me with my writer's block.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?