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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OK first off love the paring those two are also my favorite couple :) in the series however the one thing I have to say that would be OK to see (especially if you plan to do more and with a plot) is to use some more "graphic" or technical word for describing details. You have made a wonderful story and I defimetly plan to read more!
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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Its adorable and hot ^.^
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like keep going!!!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE THIS STORY DON'T STOP!!
everybodies 1st time hurts that a known fact.
everybodies 1st time hurts that a known fact.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was wonderful! keep it up!
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I hope to see more chapters.
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My face is probably flushed because I can feel the warmth in my cheeks! You have made me... uh well... *blush* That was a great read! Right before I go to bed probably wasn't the best time, now I can be pent up as I sleep, haha but maybe I'll have wonderful dreams about my fiancé. Great fic!!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... on another note... wouldn't he have turned into a cat? xDD
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first,good yob!really a beautiful "first time",can you write about Shigure and Akito's first time?i love this pairing,but there are not so many, lemon about!PLEASE!
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty decent - of course its a honeymoon already so plot not terribly expected but still good writing