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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, the fic itself was pretty good, but what was up with the dialog between them? Neither Ash OR Brock would ever talk like that o.O. That kinda ruined it.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey a good smut.. but I got confused during the conversations.. it wasn't clear as to who was saying to whom.. but the sex was goooood