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for Shuichi's Personal Assistant

by goddess8878

person IsaChan
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! do continue please!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since the beginning of the story something was telling me that she had feelings for Eiri, however since nothing happened I thought maybe its just my imagination. To be honest she really does have issues. I mean the only person that it seems she hasn't screwed or liked is Tohma, but then again maybe I missed that part. I am glad she didn't sleep with Eiri though, and hope him and Shu work out their differences so they can be happy again. Really everything was fine 'til she came along.
person NettChan
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
REVELATION!!!!!!!!! I NEVER expected that!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!!!
person mamarita
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I saw that one coming between Umiko and Eiri. But I also knew that she would not let anything happen to ruin Shuichi's happiness! Now, what is going to happen when Shuichi gets home- and please, I don't mind angst, but let Shuichi and Eiri be happy in the end!
person mamarita
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No.. Sweet Shuichi can't be unfaithful to Eiri. That doesn't work well in my book. He is too good, too pure, too innocent... Yuki is the flirt and the one that fools around, not Shuichi.. You are corrupting our Shuichi. I hope he has a change of heart before things go to far, and don't let Eiri and a drunken Umiko do anything they will regret either....

schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you started to make this girl into someone special, but this last chapter you are making her the whore that Ayaka accused her of. Are you sure this is direction you want to take the char?
person NettChan
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I knew if they got the chance, Eiri would learn to like her Nice update (Im glad my reviews make you feel that way ^_^)
person mamarita
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Umiko has been around the entire band now- I wonder if she slept with Suguru or Sakano, also. And, she is getting friendly with Eiri- that could spell T-R-O-U-B-L-E...please keep updating, I love this story!
person NettChan
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont think you suck! Stuff happens, & life really does get in the way. Just keep up with the story(at least you havent quit writing your story in the middle like some authors do)

Anyway, keep it up, it was worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person mamarita
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting interesting. I love how Hiro just happened to walk in at THAT moment. Can't wait for the update. (side note- never saw Death Note, but will check out your fic once I do)

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