rate_review Reviews

I loved the way you potrayed the scenes. Gwad! I just want more of Brandon. Please please give me more. Also tell me where else have you posted stores.

I must say, this is a lot better done the a lot of the Pokemon fics we normally see on here, and It's a welcome change! This kind of story reminds me vaguely of Pokemon Rose, another story here, but a lot better done. I also kinda like the reference to the Fan's belief that the hero's mother has a thing for Machoke. Almost sad we didn't get to see her Machoke his chicken (Pokemon X reference, if your scratching your head.)

LOL! A most excellent intro! I do look forward to the next update!