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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I’ve got to admit, you really went in deep with the story as of late. Hopefully Yoh won’t go through any terrible ordeals while with Zeke, but then again, I have no complaint on a little Yoh-angst <3 Keep up the good work! :D
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, you're surely a hao/yoh fan too, though i'm not really familiar with the name Zeki, is that really the name of Hao in English? Anyway, good plot, i hope you will finish it. It's really a bummer for a writer not to finish stories. I like the flow of your story. So TC! Hao and Yoh forever!
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please continue. Sorry this is short but I can't think of anything else to put.^^
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont know when you finished writing the second chapter, but if you ever get around to typing up a third one i would really appreciate it. I had just found out about Hao and Yoh being brothers, so I was so glad that there were no real spoilers in your chapters for me. Its an interesting plot and one i would like to see continued. Good job.
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! It is a little short, but it is going somewhere good I think! Update again soon!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh this story is soooo GOOD!! >.<
and you don't have to worry!
Where Yoh defeats Zeke and then the comet comes, it's the very last chapter ^-^
sucks I know... TT-TT
ohhh but in the manga it goes further!!!
like there's one with Hana Asakura, Yoh and Anna's son ^-^
and you don't have to worry!
Where Yoh defeats Zeke and then the comet comes, it's the very last chapter ^-^
sucks I know... TT-TT
ohhh but in the manga it goes further!!!
like there's one with Hana Asakura, Yoh and Anna's son ^-^
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo happy u updated, i hadn't seen it in a while, so i though u might've quit-*hands u gigatic cookie* thanx so much, this coupling is great, on to the smex! Update soon, onegai!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow good story. I hope that you update soon. Please dont stop writing because you dont get reviews!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please please continue i cant wait to read more ts very interesting. ^_^
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please please write more soon? please?