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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great story. I loved how you kept throwing those dreams in. Hard to tell if they were real or not. Well, the one with Gojyo eating Goku, while funny as hell, was definitely a dream. The others, especially the jeep kissing scene was perfect. Throw in a demon, some angst and a great sex scene....all the makings of a great story. Thanks so much for sharing and I do hope there is more to come from you :)
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! YAY! *sighs happily* Okay, seriously, I am not stalking your stories, but when I saw you had started writing Saiyuki, I was estatic!
I like how you went through weeks of torment between G/H. Not the 'suddenly into bed'. I liked the insights you gave into both their thoughts before they finally surrendered. :P
YAY!!!! I SO hope to see more from you on this couple.
Macha
I like how you went through weeks of torment between G/H. Not the 'suddenly into bed'. I liked the insights you gave into both their thoughts before they finally surrendered. :P
YAY!!!! I SO hope to see more from you on this couple.
Macha