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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I kinda wish this had a part two so I can see them have a bitch fight.
That would had been cool.
But I rarely see this pairing ever so this was something else.
That would had been cool.
But I rarely see this pairing ever so this was something else.
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...most of the stories here are kinda lame, but this one is really, really well written, and it's a pairing I don't even like that much. I loved getting into Paul's head and seeing the love triangle form there...and the sex scene was really well done, too. Tastefully written--none of the nonsense cliches writers usually put in, it was consistent and understood this is sex and not...whatever the hell most of the yaoi in this section is, and it really felt like your own style. Really nicely done!
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! I don't usually review but this just needed some praise!
I love how well developed all the characters are, and how messed up the relationships seem. Very well done!
I love how well developed all the characters are, and how messed up the relationships seem. Very well done!
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, poor dejected Paul.......-hugs Paul- this is so sad................Though it has some super hot parts too : ) It makes me wanna cry and read more.........write more Pweeezzz??? : )))
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Possessive Gary is awesome. Story was great, but I got confused when the italics stopped lol
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaah...well done. A curious pairing, but well written. I can't help but think that it works perfectly as a one-shot, but could easily be expanded into a series of length. Paul fighting his apparent uphill battle for Ash's affections, in his studious, difficult way, and Gary secure that he has Ash wrapped around his finger. And I would be most curious to know just where Ash's perspective on the matters lies.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There aren't many fics out there like these. I really do love Paul/Ash, and would like to see more
do you have an email, or is there any way I can contact you?
do you have an email, or is there any way I can contact you?
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was GREAT!!
You should DEFIENTLY continue!!
This ruled!!
There should be a all out battle for Ash's love between Gary and Paul!!
That would be SWEET!!! ^__^
You should DEFIENTLY continue!!
This ruled!!
There should be a all out battle for Ash's love between Gary and Paul!!
That would be SWEET!!! ^__^
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I just can't get enough of this fic!!
You did such a AWESOME job on it!!
If you can, please continue!! ^__^
You did such a AWESOME job on it!!
If you can, please continue!! ^__^
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
I'm glad there's someone else out there who thinks that Paul's only being that mean to Ash because he likes him. He he he. Yay for uke!Ash, because you really can't have him any other way.
Thanks for such a great story :3 Hopefully, you'll be writing more soon!
~Yuu-chan
I'm glad there's someone else out there who thinks that Paul's only being that mean to Ash because he likes him. He he he. Yay for uke!Ash, because you really can't have him any other way.
Thanks for such a great story :3 Hopefully, you'll be writing more soon!
~Yuu-chan