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OHMYGOD. I absolutely loved this. Really. It was so fucking well written, the way Paul thinks, and every little thing he does blows me away with how real it is. ;w; That was amazing, seriously. XD I love Gary in this fic, too. He's such a jerk, but his character is so.. him. When Ash called Gary's name, my mouth DROPPED. I was like, "...No. Way." That got me angry, but at the same time it made me happy because it makes the plot of this story ten times more powerful. Good job. TTwTT

Simply awesome. Can't be described better, simply awesome. And that's REALLY rare ...

OMG!! that was awesome!, the feeling, the passion, the lust, the pain, the love, and the sex. your left me spokeless, and i think i love you. please keep writting!

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