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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great little one shot. The part where Kaolla came to herself and kicked Amalla was a little unexpected but it was neat. I expected Keitaro to succumb and go through with Amalla's little plan, and I'll admit, I was looking forward to a coupling between Keitaro and Amalla, alas, maybe next time. Anyway, Really good, storyline, albeit short, was nice. Looking forward to more good pieces from you.
Farezzz
Farezzz
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, and please, even if you said that it was a stop there, I'd love to see a bunch of new chapters. If you (or anybody else who reads this) needs pre-readers, I would love the job in about 4-5 weeks time (going on a holiday)
Keep Up the Good Work
Keep Up the Good Work
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God.
A footjob scene. FINALLY.
And it's really fucking well written...and with Amalla. The only thing that could have made it better was Kaolla doing one, too.
Hell, there aren't nearly enough Kaolla fictions out there, much less any with footjobs.
I hereby swear my undying loyalty to you.
A footjob scene. FINALLY.
And it's really fucking well written...and with Amalla. The only thing that could have made it better was Kaolla doing one, too.
Hell, there aren't nearly enough Kaolla fictions out there, much less any with footjobs.
I hereby swear my undying loyalty to you.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that was a lemon